Black Soul....

Greyfoxx

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CHAPTER 1....

All I could remember is running. Running. Running through the jungle. I could see the Nile, the Blue Nile. The Nile that killed my mother. My mother was the most feared among the four legs. She was the black wolf Akrya. I am her daughter...Black Soul. I was her partner in crime...now she's gone. I'm alone now. Now is the time to remember my training...time for the hunt...the hunt agianst the two legs...the Humans.

For all my life, we hunted those humans who hunted my brother. We would steal thier food, cut off thier supply lines. Nothing worked. They seemed to just go around us. Now, I must gather the hunters to finnish my mothers work.

I will start with the three packs to the north. Each of the leaders are somewhat feared, but nowhere as much as my mother or me. The leaders of the packs are Dimond Eye, Nitra, and Dark Heart. Dark Heart and I crossed paths once before, in which I left him with a scar across his eyes. Unforturnatly he won't be easy to convince after that encounter.

First before I travel, I must eat something and sleep till night.Ahh, a nice rabbit rustling over there, just behinde those bushes. I could smell its' fear. Its' fear of death. I can hear its' heart beat faster and faster as I grow nearer and nearer. It dosent know that I'm comeing, but it knows that SOMETHING is coming. 5...4...3...2...1..NOW!!!Ahh, did that taste good. Now to find somewhere to sleep. Hmm, where to look. In a cave or in the jungle by the river. I'll take the river so I can drink some water before I leave.

Nightfall. My favorite time of day. Since the Nile flows north, I shall go along the river untill I get into Dimond Eyes' territory. He is the first I shall enlist in my four legged army. He is brave, he'll come in handy for the fight. Since he is a leader of a good sized pack, his pack will surly follow him to battle.

The moon is full, so I'll start on my journy. Dimond Eyes' territory is about 5 miles north of mine so it's good to travel at night. The sound of the river id the only sound execpt for my soft and light steps....CRACK!!! The sound came from the bushes to my left....CRACK!!! The sound came agian, so naturaly I went to Investagate. It ended up to only be a rat, so I kindly let it go.

So on I went, seeking out Dimond Eye and his pack. When i traveled about 3 miles, I smelled something different. This is still my territory so I should know everything in it, but I didn't know this smell. I knew it wasn't Human, it was a wolf...now I smelled more of them. THen, out from the trees came Dimond Eye with what looked to be half of his pack. He showed respect and came forward.

"Black Soul, You are the best of the Best, and we need your help." he said. I must say I was shocked at this, since I was seeking his help, but yet he was seeking mine.

 

lpp

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CHAPTER 1....
All I could remember is running. Running. Running through the jungle. I could see the Nile, the Blue Nile. The Nile that killed my mother. My mother was the most feared among the four legs. She was the black wolf Akrya. I am her daughter...Black Soul. I was her partner in crime...now she's gone. I'm alone now. Now is the time to remember my training...time for the hunt...the hunt agianst the two legs...the Humans.

For all my life, we hunted those humans who hunted my brother. We would steal thier food, cut off thier supply lines. Nothing worked. They seemed to just go around us. Now, I must gather the hunters to finnish my mothers work.

I will start with the three packs to the north. Each of the leaders are somewhat feared, but nowhere as much as my mother or me. The leaders of the packs are Dimond Eye, Nitra, and Dark Heart. Dark Heart and I crossed paths once before, in which I left him with a scar across his eyes. Unforturnatly he won't be easy to convince after that encounter.

First before I travel, I must eat something and sleep till night.Ahh, a nice rabbit rustling over there, just behinde those bushes. I could smell its' fear. Its' fear of death. I can hear its' heart beat faster and faster as I grow nearer and nearer. It dosent know that I'm comeing, but it knows that SOMETHING is coming. 5...4...3...2...1..NOW!!!Ahh, did that taste good. Now to find somewhere to sleep. Hmm, where to look. In a cave or in the jungle by the river. I'll take the river so I can drink some water before I leave.

Nightfall. My favorite time of day. Since the Nile flows north, I shall go along the river untill I get into Dimond Eyes' territory. He is the first I shall enlist in my four legged army. He is brave, he'll come in handy for the fight. Since he is a leader of a good sized pack, his pack will surly follow him to battle.

The moon is full, so I'll start on my journy. Dimond Eyes' territory is about 5 miles north of mine so it's good to travel at night. The sound of the river id the only sound execpt for my soft and light steps....CRACK!!! The sound came from the bushes to my left....CRACK!!! The sound came agian, so naturaly I went to Investagate. It ended up to only be a rat, so I kindly let it go.

So on I went, seeking out Dimond Eye and his pack. When i traveled about 3 miles, I smelled something different. This is still my territory so I should know everything in it, but I didn't know this smell. I knew it wasn't Human, it was a wolf...now I smelled more of them. THen, out from the trees came Dimond Eye with what looked to be half of his pack. He showed respect and came forward.

"Black Soul, You are the best of the Best, and we need your help." he said. I must say I was shocked at this, since I was seeking his help, but yet he was seeking mine.
post more i need more

give more i want to know what happens to dimond eye

 

Greyfoxx

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Oh ok, but ill only post SOME of the 3nd chapter, or the whole thing...dont know really...your'll have to wait
 

Greyfoxx

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Chapter 2

"What is it that you need my help with?" I asked in my usual nasty tone.

"The humans' have been hunting us, they've killed half of my pack.....and almost got me." He gestered to the North. "They came from the North and West , they tried to herd us into a circle, but we had to fight back. Since you have experiance in these kinds of matters, will you help us?" He backed away, knowing how I get when Humans hunt us.

"Did they follow you to my lands? Did you lead the to ME???" I growled and showed my teeth.

"No, we made sure of it...they retreated back to thier homes." He sounded as if he was desperate for my help.

"How many were there? of the Humans?" I asked.

"I'd say about 20 two legged, they had new weapons, nets and a tranqualizer gun." he sounded worried...as If I wouldn't help him. I started to pace, then I noticed one of his females walked up as if wanting to speak. I looked at her to go ahead and speak.

"Please Black Soul, your a female just as I. Please Help us, the two legged, they killed my two new pups...Please...." she looks as if she was mourning earlier.

"THEY KILLED OUR PUPS!" I roared, "HOW DARE THEY KILL OUR YOUNG.....OH, I'LL HELP YOU ALLRIGHT...." I calmed myself down, and spoke agian, "I'll help you if you help me."

Dimond Eye walked infront of the female that was speaking to me and said,"Anything, Black Soul, we'll do anything."

"You and your pack need to join me to get back at the Humans that killed half of your pack and my brother."

He looked at me...Thought for a moment...then smiled a happy grin...and said, "Gladly."

"Good, now please be so kind as in telling your pack that they now take orders from me for now...." I gestured to his pack,"They need to understand."

"Yes, they WILL understand." He started to walk away, to his pack and started talking to them. I heard a disagreement, a yelp, then a mutter of agreement.

Dimond Eye returned with his pack. "They now understand" He bowed his head to me, then, the rest of his pack did the same.

 

lpp

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"What is it that you need my help with?" I asked in my usual nasty tone. "The humans' have been hunting us, they've killed half of my pack.....and almost got me." He gestered to the North. "They came from the North and West , they tried to herd us into a circle, but we had to fight back. Since you have experiance in these kinds of matters, will you help us?" He backed away, knowing how I get when Humans hunt us.

"Did they follow you to my lands? Did you lead the to ME???" I growled and showed my teeth.

"No, we made sure of it...they retreated back to thier homes." He sounded as if he was desperate for my help.

"How many were there? of the Humans?" I asked.

"I'd say about 20 two legged, they had new weapons, nets and a tranqualizer gun." he sounded worried...as If I wouldn't help him. I started to pace, then I noticed one of his females walked up as if wanting to speak. I looked at her to go ahead and speak.

"Please Black Soul, your a female just as I. Please Help us, the two legged, they killed my two new pups...Please...." she looks as if she was mourning earlier.

"THEY KILLED OUR PUPS!" I roared, "HOW DARE THEY KILL OUR YOUNG.....OH, I'LL HELP YOU ALLRIGHT...." I calmed myself down, and spoke agian, "I'll help you if you help me."

Dimond Eye walked infront of the female that was speaking to me and said,"Anything, Black Soul, we'll do anything."

"You and your pack need to join me to get back at the Humans that killed half of your pack and my brother."

He looked at me...Thought for a moment...then smiled a happy grin...and said, "Gladly."

"Good, now please be so kind as in telling your pack that they now take orders from me for now...." I gestured to his pack,"They need to understand."

"Yes, they WILL understand." He started to walk away, to his pack and started talking to them. I heard a disagreement, a yelp, then a mutter of agreement.

Dimond Eye returned with his pack. "They now understand" He bowed his head to me, then, the rest of his pack did the same.
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there is good action tonight

 

Greyfoxx

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Do u know how long it takes me to type this ****?! I'll post some more later tonight...allright? can you handle waiting a few hours?
 

lpp

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Do u know how long it takes me to type this ****?! I'll post some more later tonight...allright? can you handle waiting a few hours?
yes i can wait

*sits and stares and waits*

 

MysteryLpChick

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yeah, you posted your story. Now were equal maybe I should post another story its going to be called Mike's Guide To Surviving High School. I know I won't be able to post Vampire Story I'll get bad too many bad stuff.
 

MysteryLpChick

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That would be cool. I might start a website...CRAZY GIRLS WHO LOVE CHESTER AND MIKE THAT WRITE FANFICS ALL DAY....AND SAILOR MOON AND INUYASHA TOO
 

MysteryLpChick

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*Drops Chester On His Head* Oops sorry. Give me Mike or I'll get Chester's-um-oh I give up I'm going to type somemore on fanfic.net
 
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