Black Soul....

[Greyfoxx]

Rest of chapter 2 and the start of chapter 3

We started north, after about a mile and a half of walking, the sun was starting to rise. Dimond Eye looked at the sun, then looked at me. I nodded. We shall sleep through the day and move during the cover of night.

Some of the females drank from the Nile while I kept watch over them. The rest of the females and males, including Dimond Eye, went hunting for food for us even though I insisted on going. Dimond Eye said if humans come, I must fight them off, and I knew he was right.

CHAPTER 3

I lifted my head toward the rising sun. Ahh, I remembered the old days when there was no Humans around us. Yes, they were here but they were afriad of us. Now, they wanted to hunt us for out meat.

I heard the males kill a few rabbits for us. They brought es the meal, and gave me a rabbit. I refused to eat it. I gave it to another female who needed it. She didn't eat it right away to make sure that I didn't want it. I wanted to hunt for myself, no male help. I love the hunt. Stalking the prey, watching thier movements, listening to thier heartbeat growing uneasy.

 

[lpp]

We started north, after about a mile and a half of walking, the sun was starting to rise. Dimond Eye looked at the sun, then looked at me. I nodded. We shall sleep through the day and move during the cover of night.
Some of the females drank from the Nile while I kept watch over them. The rest of the females and males, including Dimond Eye, went hunting for food for us even though I insisted on going. Dimond Eye said if humans come, I must fight them off, and I knew he was right.

CHAPTER 3

I lifted my head toward the rising sun. Ahh, I remembered the old days when there was no Humans around us. Yes, they were here but they were afriad of us. Now, they wanted to hunt us for out meat.

I heard the males kill a few rabbits for us. They brought es the meal, and gave me a rabbit. I refused to eat it. I gave it to another female who needed it. She didn't eat it right away to make sure that I didn't want it. I wanted to hunt for myself, no male help. I love the hunt. Stalking the prey, watching thier movements, listening to thier heartbeat growing uneasy.

NICE it was so good

can't wait for the rest........

and i like your style of writting

 

[Greyfoxx]

NICE it was so good
can't wait for the rest........

and i like your style of writting

thanks alot...most don't like it but im glad you do!

 

[MysteryLpChick]

I like....I like....now I'm going to log off my head hurts. I hope you agree with the type of the story thing. Chester would like that wouldn't he.

 

[Greyfoxx]

the rest of chapter 3

I told Dimond Eye that I was going to hunt for myself. He didn't really like the Idea, but he agreed since I was thier only hope. I told him if he worried, send a patrol to find me. I assured him I'd be back soon.

As I left, most of the females started to look worried, but I assured them that I was only hunting and not going to leave them. AH, as soon as I left, I felt the thrill of the hunt upon me. I tilted my head some to catch the smells of different types of prey.

Hmm...Whats on the menu today? Ah, a rather husky rabbit that is only about ten yards to the west...now eight yards. ****! Dimond Eyes' pack is on thier was and sacred off my prey. Thier sent scared off that rabbit.

"What do you think your doing?!" I growled. I was furious.

"We were sent by Dimond Eye to find you and make sure you are safe." said one of the wolves. I could see the fear in thier eyes.

" You scared off my prey!What were you thinking!You shall pay for that~" I growled and snapped my teeth at them. They ran back to Dimond Eye like I wanted.

So, on with the hunt...once agian I tilted my head in the air to find out about the surrounding areas.Darn....The rabbit that I was tracking was now more than 25 yards away to the north.

Slowly I crept up on my unknowing prey. 10 yards ayay, 5 yards away.....SNAP!!!!!My own food is much better. I turned to go back to the camp for some water. I ran into the search pack agian. This time I told them that I was returning to the camp.

When I got back I started toward the river when Dimond Eye spoke to me.

"During the night we must travel quickly or else the humans might move in on my territory."

"Fine, let me drink before I sleep." I continued toward the water.

I picked a spot under the trees to sleep. Everyone else slept aroundme. During the day, I woke occaitional to check and make sure there was no humans in the near area.

At nightfall , the pack was still sleeping. I haven't had a good howl in such a long time. I looked up, the moon was still full....I pointed my nose at it and let out a good long howl. At that moment, the rest of the pack woke, and joined me.

"Ahh, that felt good." I looked around as I did, I said,"We need to find the humans tonight."

"Black Soul, how are we to make it that far? You are the strongest around and we are nowhere near as stong as you" said a male that I didn't know.

"Fine, As you wish, we shall get there tomarrowed...agreed?"

There was a mutter of agreement.

"Good, lets move."As I finnished speaking, me and Dimond Eye took the lead. FOr hours we marched, occaitionaly stopping for group howls and a drink.

 

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I told Dimond Eye that I was going to hunt for myself. He didn't really like the Idea, but he agreed since I was thier only hope. I told him if he worried, send a patrol to find me. I assured him I'd be back soon.As I left, most of the females started to look worried, but I assured them that I was only hunting and not going to leave them. AH, as soon as I left, I felt the thrill of the hunt upon me. I tilted my head some to catch the smells of different types of prey.

Hmm...Whats on the menu today? Ah, a rather husky rabbit that is only about ten yards to the west...now eight yards. ****! Dimond Eyes' pack is on thier was and sacred off my prey. Thier sent scared off that rabbit.

"What do you think your doing?!" I growled. I was furious.

"We were sent by Dimond Eye to find you and make sure you are safe." said one of the wolves. I could see the fear in thier eyes.

" You scared off my prey!What were you thinking!You shall pay for that~" I growled and snapped my teeth at them. They ran back to Dimond Eye like I wanted.

So, on with the hunt...once agian I tilted my head in the air to find out about the surrounding areas.Darn....The rabbit that I was tracking was now more than 25 yards away to the north.

Slowly I crept up on my unknowing prey. 10 yards ayay, 5 yards away.....SNAP!!!!!My own food is much better. I turned to go back to the camp for some water. I ran into the search pack agian. This time I told them that I was returning to the camp.

When I got back I started toward the river when Dimond Eye spoke to me.

"During the night we must travel quickly or else the humans might move in on my territory."

"Fine, let me drink before I sleep." I continued toward the water.

I picked a spot under the trees to sleep. Everyone else slept aroundme. During the day, I woke occaitional to check and make sure there was no humans in the near area.

At nightfall , the pack was still sleeping. I haven't had a good howl in such a long time. I looked up, the moon was still full....I pointed my nose at it and let out a good long howl. At that moment, the rest of the pack woke, and joined me.

"Ahh, that felt good." I looked around as I did, I said,"We need to find the humans tonight."

"Black Soul, how are we to make it that far? You are the strongest around and we are nowhere near as stong as you" said a male that I didn't know.

"Fine, As you wish, we shall get there tomarrowed...agreed?"

There was a mutter of agreement.

"Good, lets move."As I finnished speaking, me and Dimond Eye took the lead. FOr hours we marched, occaitionaly stopping for group howls and a drink.

*GASP*

more more more

i want more this is so so good

i can picture everything smell everything

that is how good this story is

 

[Greyfoxx]

well im glad you can, thats the point of my writing

 

[Greyfoxx]

Chapter 4

We reached the edge of my land by sun rise. If we were going at my pace, we would be far into Dimond Eyes' land. When we started to search for a place to stay, we ran into a little problem....A small village of HUmans are here. They, of corse, wanted to hunt us. I, on the other hand, wouldn't let that happen. I ordered the whole pack to attack them. We Did. They didn't kill unless they had tnce they ran, we took over thier huts. We slept in the biggest hut. I was allowed to go hunting this time because Dimond Eye wanted to stay with the rest of the pack and within the hut.

I lead the hunting party, but they all asked questions, so I agreed to give them some pointers if they would just SHUT UP! I showed them how to smell the air for sents, even though they should know that already.

I found the home of many rabbits. I crept towared the back entrance to the hole while the rest of the pack stayed at the front. I Barked into the hole to scared them out....about 7 or 8 came out. The males and females that were waiting caught them easily. I could smell there was another one in there.....so I dug a hole over it and grabbed it. Once I had it, I snaped it's neck.

When I got back, Dimond Eye asked me the one thin I didn't know how to answer.

"Where or Who is your father?"

This was the one question that I couldn't answer and never had the courage to ask my mother. The only thing I could remember about him is that he had the eyes like the sea after a storm. When I was a pup, he dissapeared from us. He was never heard of since.

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I can't post all of chapter 4 yet

 

[Pain]

We reached the edge of my land by sun rise. If we were going at my pace, we would be far into Dimond Eyes' land. When we started to search for a place to stay, we ran into a little problem....A small village of HUmans are here. They, of corse, wanted to hunt us. I, on the other hand, wouldn't let that happen. I ordered the whole pack to attack them. We Did. They didn't kill unless they had tnce they ran, we took over thier huts. We slept in the biggest hut. I was allowed to go hunting this time because Dimond Eye wanted to stay with the rest of the pack and within the hut.I lead the hunting party, but they all asked questions, so I agreed to give them some pointers if they would just SHUT UP! I showed them how to smell the air for sents, even though they should know that already.

I found the home of many rabbits. I crept towared the back entrance to the hole while the rest of the pack stayed at the front. I Barked into the hole to scared them out....about 7 or 8 came out. The males and females that were waiting caught them easily. I could smell there was another one in there.....so I dug a hole over it and grabbed it. Once I had it, I snaped it's neck.

When I got back, Dimond Eye asked me the one thin I didn't know how to answer.

"Where or Who is your father?"

This was the one question that I couldn't answer and never had the courage to ask my mother. The only thing I could remember about him is that he had the eyes like the sea after a storm. When I was a pup, he dissapeared from us. He was never heard of since.

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I can't post all of chapter 4 yet

OMFG

i can't wait

i must get more

i must wait but i need more

*sits and waits*

 

[Greyfoxx]

lol.....okokok....ill try to post more....no promises

 

[Greyfoxx]

The rest of chapter 4

I took a deep breathe and said with great regret,"I don't know really, he dissapeared when I was a pup." Since wolves can't cry, my soul was crying.

"Oh, Im so sorry. I had no Idea."said Dimond Eye.

For a long time, I walked with my tail down and my head down also. Some of the pack tried to get my mind off of my father, but nothing they could do helped me.

When Dimond Eye spoke agian, it made me feel a little better,"I never knew my father when i was young. Then he found me a couple of years ago, maybe your father is waiting untill your ready to meet him."

I tilted my ead to the sky to see if there was anything different. Nothing. Nothing different than the usual things. I turned to the pack.

"Spread out. Search for anything suspicous." I growled.

The pack nodded in agreement. They went out to the left and the right of me. Dimond Eye went forward with m. It was quiet. Something was wrong, out of place.

One of the males of Dimond Eyes Pack called out to me...."BLACK SOUL!!!!! COME HERE! I FOUND SOMETHING!!!!"

 

[lpp]

I took a deep breathe and said with great regret,"I don't know really, he dissapeared when I was a pup." Since wolves can't cry, my soul was crying."Oh, Im so sorry. I had no Idea."said Dimond Eye.

For a long time, I walked with my tail down and my head down also. Some of the pack tried to get my mind off of my father, but nothing they could do helped me.

When Dimond Eye spoke agian, it made me feel a little better,"I never knew my father when i was young. Then he found me a couple of years ago, maybe your father is waiting untill your ready to meet him."

I tilted my ead to the sky to see if there was anything different. Nothing. Nothing different than the usual things. I turned to the pack.

"Spread out. Search for anything suspicous." I growled.

The pack nodded in agreement. They went out to the left and the right of me. Dimond Eye went forward with m. It was quiet. Something was wrong, out of place.

One of the males of Dimond Eyes Pack called out to me...."BLACK SOUL!!!!! COME HERE! I FOUND SOMETHING!!!!"

WHATTTTTTTTTTT

NO post more

i need it

 

[Greyfoxx]

Chapter 5

(sowwie i havent posted in a long time)

I ran to the spot instantly. There, right before my eyes was a trap. A human device to capture wolves. I had to figure out a way to disarm it. It looked much like a bear trap but a lil weaker, but yet strong enough to break the bones.

Since it was alot like a bear trap, i told one of the females to throw a larg stick in the middle. She looked around a bit and found one. SNAP!!! It worked.

"We shall stay here untill the humans come to check the trap."

Dimond Eye looked happy about my little plan. There was a hill on the other side of the river. Ah if only we could get there. There was a three that was leaning over the mighty Nile, about to fall.

"You!" I was speaking to a wolf that was a lil heavier than the others, "Run at that tree to knock it down."

I muttered to myeslf, "Yes that will work."

HE got back a good thirty feet. Ran, then hit the tree with all his power. CRACK! Thump. It worked and the tree fell and reached the other side of the river. I shouted at the pack.

"Everyone over NOW!" I started first. Dimond Eye made sure nobody was left behind.

The other side was peacful and confortable. As we settled down for some rest, I saw a gray mist fall over us and for once I fekt safe.

 

[MysteryLpChick]

Oh, ***... you actually update... I read this chapter before, remember the loud stupid yellow bus we forced to take back and forth to school.

 

[Greyfoxx]

ahhh...the loud stupid bus. yea i remember, but i am posting in order so yea~