First Verse

[azemkamikaze03]

*after every line its a breath so take not of that

The pain
the pulse
i bleed
the most
i feel
as though
my time
has come
please tell
me why
i
must die
when i sit in the corner its only blood that i cry
I dont
feel
appri-
ciated
my skill
my love
is underestimated
please
believe
me when
I say
Im not having Such a marvoles ****in day
I got
this gun
in the back of my pocekt
i feel
as though
i need to blast off a rocket
Im a key
that wont fit
in
the socket
lemme stop
lemme breath
lemme take a fukin second
this verse
this love
is bound to teach a lesson
this rhyme is it a curse
or is it a mutha fuickin blessin

 

[XrockinfreakX]

Nice one. Very ummm whats the word cant think of it. Well its non-happy-ish, its still good though.

 

[azemkamikaze03]

more non happy songs on the way

 

[Brkng_Th_Hbt]

i think the word is "emo" lol. maybe not. >_>

but i liked it. very good Azem :thumbsup:

 

[Marizka]

yeah, I like it too, it's different

 

[immortal89]

It's good ya, i enjoyed reading it