JammerG's Poetry Journal

[JammerG]

Hey My name is JammerG, I am over thirty... A granny rocking the boards, Linkin Park fan majorly and LPU member. Tired of my old poetry site haven't found one I like so am looking at posting my poetry here. Would love your feed back and if you wish to add your comments on a certain piece please do. Hope you enjoy the first, it is a love poem. different types, diferent rhyming values, different rhythms, different word associations. Tell me what you think.

Remembrance

The darkness fades along with the vivid dreams of you

Your touch, it graces my skin with a warmth that excites

It isn't a caress as such, more an acknowledgement of your love

Promising future pleasure and delight

My flesh raises at the fantasy you create in our sanctuary

It brings forth your untempered ecstacy

when we meet

It is a joyous celebration that heats until we are melded as one

You are my joy, you are my light, you are my lover,You I remember.

 

[JammerG]

Here is the second love poem called

LOVERS

He guides her through gardens that match her beauty.

Escorting the lady 'tis his duty.

Her olive skin holds golden light.

Her raven hair blue as night.

He holds her hand tucked in his arm.

He teases, taunts, never harms.

Her white teeth gleam with her girlish grins.

her blood screams through her veins within.

He leads her to the hedge row maze.

Upon shadowed ******* he chances to gaze.

She seems unaware, it's her deception.

Her free hand flutters there, draws attention.

Within the walls he brings her closer.

She runs away,with a laugh - chase her!

They play this game going deeper, deeper.

He spies her hiding, he plays creeper.

And in the bower she is caught.

In his arms, she refuses naught.

He pulls her close pressing his charms.

around his neck she wraps her arms.

His hands trace with intentions.

His hands undo all conventions.

Free at last in green air she stands.

Fingers tease and smooth his glands.

His tongue dips to taste her lips.

With a final tug his breeches slip.

Locked in battle for nature's gift.

Upon the table, her he lifts.

With practiced tongue and hands tender.

Patterns are drawn on thighs, slender.

A gasp escapes her as he plies his art

Wilder faster beats her heart.

He brings forth her cries for more.

She is arching up to heaven's door.

Tasting all she has to offer.

His tongue delves within her coffer.

Her nails bite into his shoulders.

He smiles at his wanton and grows bolder.

With all that nature intended.

Himself in her moistness he implanted.

With cries unheard in a monastry,

He thrusts their love to ecstacy.

And as they love in their hidden bower,

Mother earth smiles at her power.

The couple lay spent, enjoying their pleasure.

Free to love again at their leisure.

 

[JammerG]

The following are just some light pieces, They might make you laugh or they might make you cry. If they make you think, it is enough.

Pre Morn

The sun isn't up yet it is still predawn

But the birds are beckoning the sun of morn

I like to feel morning, not the smell, sights or sounds,

but feel the air, stirring wrapping me all around

As the darkness pales the streets become alive

dogs walking people, taking all in stride

I sit on my step and watch and sip and smoke and listen,

inside my family sleeps while the dew stars glisten

The changing pastels in the sky harken the new day

As with riotous orangey red, the clouds make way

For the cold of sunrise and the rising of the wind

As the warm sun rays tease me, my day is now begin.

The next ride

Sand dances, whirling under my toes

as meringue tipped aqua liquid licks my thighs.

The pull of the moon's cycle drawing me deeper, deeper... into a

warmth of sensual touch, calming soothing in its stroke...

Under the the crashing green glass sheets, arms and legs propel

out to the calmer water...

Floating in a lake of serenity with nothing but blue beneath and

in the skies.

Crystal tears of the mer sparkle in the light of day against

sundrenched skin as the tide grips me, I am soaring looking from

up high on a fluid curve.

Back to where two worlds collide...

Again I stand and wade and swim and wait for the next ride.

Your Smile

I watch you while you sleep, so innocent and small

Your blond cap fair, I wait for you to wake

When You wake, I want to cry,

You fill my heart to bursting.

Your eyes dark from seep look out from

Behind protective bars

You look, unfocused, unsure at first, then you see me.

You roll over, not taking your eyes off me

You reach out your hand for my touch

My heart cracks and tears fill to course down my cheeks

As I reach for you

You wrap your tiny hand around my finger,

I hold back a sob.

I stand and reach over, lift you up

You cuddle into me, I hold you tight.

You lift your head, you look at me into my heart.

It shatters, As my legs wobble to the carpet jelly,

All because of...

Your Smile.

Why Me

I dare not sleep

The darkness falls subltely when I closemy eyes

The soffocating all encompassing

blackness!

Anxiety and fear builds gnawing at my

stomach,burning in my gut...

The horror of the moment lives,

the moment I relax in sleep...

I sweat, I scream, I awake,I am sick

Head whirling, all the motion

Why the **** does it haunt me?

It happened so long ago.

I can see his dirty eyes, his sickly

salivating smile

I can smell his breath, his odour,

sweet sweat stink...

I hate it, I scrub and scrub under

stinging hot needles of water...

Skin raw, but my mind sees his hand

prints, still I will

never be clean...

Will the nightmare never end?

Why now? Why now?

Why me? Why the child of three?

Why the child of three...

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

omfg ur so **** good !

 

[JammerG]

Hey honey thank you wrote three more last night... will post them tomorrow night

 

[stupidsoul1]

WHOA *gives u a cookie for ur efforts*

those are sooooo good!! i cant wait to see what comes next

 

[JammerG]

The Acquaintance

I made a new acquaintance some weeks ago...

Who would think that we would click,

that close we would become

Who would think that we would work

Our thoughts unite as one.

With backgrounds so similar

But of which you would not speak

We ran one night to contemplate

our pasts had been so bleak

Now when I see my acquaintance

hours we spend

Checking out Poetic License

My acquaintance is now my Friend.

Lets talk

Hey sister, I see the sorrow in your eyes,

Hey sister is it just me you despise, venomise?

I sit with you watching vids

there ain't no kids

I ain't telling lies

I see it in your eyes

Hey, girl why don't you talk to me

Hey girl, tell me the way it ought to be

I feel your anger and your pain

Don't want to walk this path again

You have to tell me the truth

I don't need proof

Empath is straining

Tears are raining

Give me an answer

Not Yes or no Sir.

Hey sister Im in pain too

Hey sister we do what we do

Hey girl I'm missing my friend

Hey girl is this where our friendship ends???

You Are

You are the most

Amazing

Dazing

Friend

You ar the most

Halarious

Imaginative

Chic

You are the most

Invigorating

Enervating

Woman

You are My friend.

A Lunar Hunger

I try to fight it

But it takes over

When the moon is full

I just have to drink my fill.

I pant, I salivate

My body changes,

It is painful

Yet I yearn for it.

I cry out my need

It has to be satisfied

An aching hunger

Its limits to be tried.

I prowl through darkness

tears of pain running

Heedless down my cheeks

It is a hunger driving.

Until I find my feast

I am savage in my attack

There is a crack

My food has no life

The warm crimson liquid

Spurting forth

I drink deeply

The salt sweet

I savour each drop

Before I begin

Feeding on tender

Young flesh mmmm...

Eighty-two was a good year

Yet now fear drives me blindly back

I rest in my sancturary

In daylight face reality again.

Silken Flames

Silken flames of red and violet weave into the night, as shots

of gold glint against a thousand stars...

You sit beside our fire, your hand strumming our delights

We sing, we laugh, we listen to you play your guitar

With drinks, and good company,

Our night is filled with cheer, you give us all we want and more...

With voices raised in song, there is naught that we fear

As you go on fingering all your chords

You have touched our souls and fed our desires,

as the embers burn into the ashes of the fire...

You have given us all that you have,

You have shown us the moon and you have taken us higher

We sit here this night

at the edge of the world waiting for it to inspire...

We laugh, we sing, we reminisce

As the red and amber, golden flames dance in our fire

 

[JammerG]

Hey just gotta say the first one I wrote here tonight is the first I wrote about Ravyn... 2000, freaky huh?

Hope you like them take care y'all see you in my journal...

 

[misery]

Wow, those are really impressive! You're talented

 

[JammerG]

Wow' date=' those are really impressive! You're talented [/quote']
Thanks Misery, will post more over the next week when I get around to it.

Will have some street rhyme hopefully next time

 

[Friðbjörn]

Hey My name is JammerG, I am over thirty... A granny rocking the boards, Linkin Park fan majorly and LPU member. Tired of my old poetry site haven't found one I like so am looking at posting my poetry here. Would love your feed back and if you wish to add your comments on a certain piece please do. Hope you enjoy the first, it is a love poem. different types, diferent rhyming values, different rhythms, different word associations. Tell me what you think.
Remembrance

The darkness fades along with the vivid dreams of you

Your touch, it graces my skin with a warmth that excites

It isn't a caress as such, more an acknowledgement of your love

Promising future pleasure and delight

My flesh raises at the fantasy you create in our sanctuary

It brings forth your untempered ecstacy

when we meet

It is a joyous celebration that heats until we are melded as one

You are my joy, you are my light, you are my lover,You I remember.

If this isn't passion, then I don't know what it is :thumbsup:

Great poem, beautiful words.

 

[o0SugaxNxSpice0o]

Jammer, your poetry is beautiful. They're really thoughful and written perfectly! I love them! Especially "Lovers" and "your Smile". I kinda guessed that "The Acquaintance" was about Ravynlee! =D It was sweet! "Why Me" was also really good as well, kinda dark, but you expressed it well. Awesome job! Keep up the writing! =D

 

[JammerG]

If this isn't passion, then I don't know what it is :thumbsup: Great poem, beautiful words.

Thanks honey am looking at posting more just gotta get around to doing it... just busy in journals...

One of my favourite poems. How I hope passion would feel. I might find it someday....

 

[JammerG]

Hurt My Heart

Today you hurt my heart

I know you've learnt the art

You're smart

Off the Chart

With the blows that punch my brain

Your're hate drives me insane

What's your gain

What's your game

You think you are hurting inside

What the **** do you think I hide

Do you think you are better

Perform to the letter

On your best behavior

Don't pretend to be my savior

You might be a man

So what's your plan

Beat me to a pulp?

Mould me like one sculpts

I am not a piece of clay

I am flesh and bone

I don't choose to be on my own

You've driven

Striven

Tried to make me bleed

But this is now my creed...

ENOUGH!

_____________________

*** Gave me a heart>

*** gave me a heart

It is there to trust

I gave it to you

You gave it back all bust!

You've tried to make amends

You let me wall away

You thought I would catch up

You didn't stop or stay

To help, you left me

I tried to climb, it's slippery

You didn't even miss me

You still expect love from me?

What a sick joke you play

First you tell me to go away

Then you cry stay

Don't deserve the time of day

What did I get into

What am I to you

A mother to our children

your convenient screw?

Here is my reply

These words are all true

Hear my voice cry

**** it Screw you!!!

 

[Friðbjörn]

Hurt My Heart
Today you hurt my heart

I know you've learnt the art

You're smart

Off the Chart

With the blows that punch my brain

Your're hate drives me insane

What's your gain

What's your game

You think you are hurting inside

What the **** do you think I hide

Do you think you are better

Perform to the letter

On your best behavior

Don't pretend to be my savior

You might be a man

So what's your plan

Beat me to a pulp?

Mould me like one sculpts

I am not a piece of clay

I am flesh and bone

I don't choose to be on my own

You've driven

Striven

Tried to make me bleed

But this is now my creed...

ENOUGH!

_____________________

*** Gave me a heart>

*** gave me a heart

It is there to trust

I gave it to you

You gave it back all bust!

You've tried to make amends

You let me wall away

You thought I would catch up

You didn't stop or stay

To help, you left me

I tried to climb, it's slippery

You didn't even miss me

You still expect love from me?

What a sick joke you play

First you tell me to go away

Then you cry stay

Don't deserve the time of day

What did I get into

What am I to you

A mother to our children

your convenient screw?

Here is my reply

These words are all true

Hear my voice cry

**** it Screw you!!!

Wow, very rhytmic, I like the one above especially cause it would make good rap :thumbsup:

They are both full of feeling, good topic, clearly coming from your heart. If you're not on your way, then I'd publish a book with these if I were you.

Great job.

 

[Heart_LP]

I´ve red all your poeams now and they are just great!

You describe things very clearly and I like it! :thumbsup:

 

[JammerG]

Wow, very rhytmic, I like the one above especially cause it would make good rap :thumbsup:
They are both full of feeling, good topic, clearly coming from your heart. If you're not on your way, then I'd publish a book with these if I were you.

Great job.

Hey Viking... I love street Rhyme.. (Rap) I just have to get my tongue untwisted at the end of it...

Thanks for you encouragement... am looking at working on a book of my poetry over Christmas... Am printing them all out for my Lit lecturer to check out and see what he thinks...

 

[Friðbjörn]

Hey Viking... I love street Rhyme.. (Rap) I just have to get my tongue untwisted at the end of it...
Thanks for you encouragement... am looking at working on a book of my poetry over Christmas... Am printing them all out for my Lit lecturer to check out and see what he thinks...

Untwisted? lol

I'm sure your lecturer will think good of them, I don't see how s/he can't.

Keep this up :thumbsup:

 

[JammerG]

Hey Guys...

Another Romantic... Erotic... Piece of Poetry mucking around last night.. Took 15 minutes to write:

AFTERGLOW

I lay basking in the afterglow,

Smiling against your chest.

Your hands sweep over me

One gently caresses my breast.

You pull me closer to you,

Your lips speak my name.

I stretch and turn towards your warmth

Ebmbers smoulder: unquenched flame.

My fingers trace your arm

Your loving warmth keeps me from the cold

Your feelings soothe me

Your love keeps me from growing old.

You move to cover me,

Your heat glowing in your eyes.

Your touch amplifying Ecstasy

Your lips silence my mindless cries...

Tell me what you think???