Punk Jane (all about the rhyme)

[brokenangel]

if you start reading it...just keep reading. it's a story fit into a poem-ish thing. it's all about the rhyming lemme know what you think

There’s this girl named Jane
Who had a pretty face
She was lost inside
Didn’t know her place

Nobody knew her
She was ‘just’ a punk
Nobody cared that
She was a major drunk

Filled her mind with alcohol
‘Till she couldn’t feel
She thought it was the only way
Her wounds would heal

If you tried talking to her
She would just ignore
Not caring that, behind her back,
She was labeled a ‘whore’

One day Punk Jane
Came drunk to school
Teased as usual
But this time she couldn’t keep her cool

Not being in control
She started a fight
She didn’t care who
She took the first person in sight

A little boy was spotted
And slammed to the ground
Punk Jane started to pound on him
Without making a single sound

He screamed and pleaded
For her to stop
But it fell on deaf ears
For her sanity level had dropped

His cries died down
As a teacher pulled them apart
Punk Jane smiled slightly,
Admiring her art

That boy got rushed to the hospital
In a bloody pool
Little Johnny would still be alive
If Punk Jane didn’t come drunk to school

 

[stupidsoul1]

whoa thats cool

except my best friend is named jane

 

[brokenangel]

Oh..lol..sorry about that. She's not a drunk, right? .. I love that name though. Tell her she has a great name haha. And thanks for reading it

 

[Marizka]

wow I like it! a lot!! 10/10 nice how you made a poem of a story, good job

 

[Friðbjörn]

I agree, great job there :thumbsup:

 

[brokenangel]

yayy!! thank you thank you! my day is all good now . thanks for taking the time to read it