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This is a Fort Minor fic I've just started. Kind of a different take on things, I set it back in high school. I randomly got the idea about half an hour ago, and so here's the first little bit I've produced.
Remember the Name
Fort Minor High was a small high school in the town of West Minor. It was an old school, having been built more than fifty years prior to the current generation. The bricks on the outside were wearing thin and crumbling, the pillars and roofing tiles all broken and covered with graffiti. Inside of the large building, the once white walls were now grey and back with dirt and filth from the passing years. The floor tiles had no trace of the once beautiful beige and gold patterns that had been christened on them and were instead littered with garbage and cigarette butts, much like the surrounding fields outside. Judging by the outside, the school looked like a penitentiary. The halls smelled of body odor, cigarettes, weed and cologne. However, most of the student body was used to it by now.
Students littered the hallways like they themselves littered the ground; all clumped together in huge groups, blaring their ghetto blasters and rapping along to the music. Guys would wear baggy clothing five sizes too big for them, their baseball caps turned sideways or backwards and toques barely touching their scalp. Pants would hang down just above the crotch, showing plaid boxers as their shirts rode up when they walked. Girls wore skin tight clothing that left nothing to the imagination; low cut tops and tiny skirts that could easily pass off as belts.
The dominant race at Fort Minor High was mostly blacks, but only by about a dozen. In this high school, social class meant a lot. If you were poor, chances were you’d never hang out with someone who was rich. It was just the way things were. Like all high schools, the student body had two main divisions: the popular kids and those were less popular. But because it was such a small school, everyone knew each other. So they all knew of whose way to stay out of.
Included in the group of the school’s most popular people were a group of rappers that hung outside near the metal doors of the gym. The group consisted of five guys: Ryan “Ryu” Maginn, Takbir “Tak” Bashir, DJ Cheapshot, Vin Skully, and Mike Shinoda, who called themselves the Divine Five. The five of them were all handsome, talented young men who were very popular with the ladies. They were jokers; obnoxious boys who usually got whatever they wanted by any means necessary. They were players, and yet everyone seemed to love them. All accept one person.
Chrissy Baldwin hated Fort Minor High with a passion. She didn’t really fit in with the rest of the students there. While the majority of girls were sluts, Chrissy hated wearing clothing that left you almost stark naked. She didn’t like most of the music that the other students would play; it was all about sex, drugs and money, all discriminating against women. She couldn’t believe that people listened to that ****, let alone sang it. It was horrible, the things she heard kids saying about each other. Stereotyping, blackmailing, all the hate. It was stupid and immature, and Chrissy hated being around it.
“Can you believe them?” Chrissy asked her best friend Tanya Larkins at lunch one afternoon. They were standing by their lockers looking on at Cheapshot and his gang, dancing to hip hop and rapping along to the beat of the music that blared through the hazy summer air. “What a bunch of morons, honestly.” Rolling her eyes, Chrissy opened her locker and shoved her books inside. Tanya crossed her arms and sighed heavily.
“Yeah, well let me tell you, girl, it ain’t gonna change one bit,” she responded. “They ain’t no way those guys are gonna smarten up. Hell, they can’t even dress properly, let alone do well in school. I bet at least half of them drop outta school.” Tanya was on Chrissy’s side when it came to the other students in the school. She, too, couldn’t stand their behaviour most of the time.
“Well, it’s a good thing they don’t talk to us, because I’d sure give them one hell of a beating.” Chrissy closed her locker and her and Tanya set off for the cafeteria. It, like the rest of the school, was old and gross. Chrissy didn’t dare eat anything from the caf, so instead she’d make her own lunches and take them to school. Sitting down on the cleanest chair she could find, she and Tanya began to eat.
“So, how’s everything with Travis?” Chrissy asked her friend anxiously. “Is it anything serious yet?” Tanya’s face seemed to light up at the mention of her boyfriend.
“Oh, yes!” she exclaimed, grinning widely. “Oh, Chrissy, he’s so perfect. I mean, he’s such a gentleman. Dresses fashionably, unlike the guys here. Travis is perfect, Chrissy. Oh, and his huge muscles and cute goatee…” Chrissy could tell that Tanya really liked this guy. Although Chrissy had never met him, he sounded really nice.
“So what about you, Chrissy?” Tanya asked, taking a bite out of her chicken wrap. “You haven’t been with a guy for I don’t know how long. You got your sights set on anyone?” Chrissy smiled and shook her head, brushing back pieces of her long blonde hair.
“Nope. Not yet,” she answered simply. “I don’t think I’ll find any guy around here that’s right for me.” Her voice dropped to a quiet whisper almost as she thought about how true her words were. There was no one really worth dating in town that she knew would be a loyal boyfriend. Tanya reached her dark arm across the table and gently held onto Chrissy’s hand.
“Don’t worry, you’ll find someone. Nothing’s impossible, you know.” Chrissy knew she was right. But at the moment, everything looked pretty bleak. And to dampen her spirits, the Divine Five walked into the caf. Groaning, Chrissy folded her arms on the table and lay her head down. Her ears rung as people started cheering, and Chrissy could hear someone starting a beat. Then the rapping came in, speaking about sex and women in a derogatory way. Slamming her fists down on the table, she stood up and marched over to the five popular young rappers with a look of pure hatred across her face.
Remember the Name
Fort Minor High was a small high school in the town of West Minor. It was an old school, having been built more than fifty years prior to the current generation. The bricks on the outside were wearing thin and crumbling, the pillars and roofing tiles all broken and covered with graffiti. Inside of the large building, the once white walls were now grey and back with dirt and filth from the passing years. The floor tiles had no trace of the once beautiful beige and gold patterns that had been christened on them and were instead littered with garbage and cigarette butts, much like the surrounding fields outside. Judging by the outside, the school looked like a penitentiary. The halls smelled of body odor, cigarettes, weed and cologne. However, most of the student body was used to it by now.
Students littered the hallways like they themselves littered the ground; all clumped together in huge groups, blaring their ghetto blasters and rapping along to the music. Guys would wear baggy clothing five sizes too big for them, their baseball caps turned sideways or backwards and toques barely touching their scalp. Pants would hang down just above the crotch, showing plaid boxers as their shirts rode up when they walked. Girls wore skin tight clothing that left nothing to the imagination; low cut tops and tiny skirts that could easily pass off as belts.
The dominant race at Fort Minor High was mostly blacks, but only by about a dozen. In this high school, social class meant a lot. If you were poor, chances were you’d never hang out with someone who was rich. It was just the way things were. Like all high schools, the student body had two main divisions: the popular kids and those were less popular. But because it was such a small school, everyone knew each other. So they all knew of whose way to stay out of.
Included in the group of the school’s most popular people were a group of rappers that hung outside near the metal doors of the gym. The group consisted of five guys: Ryan “Ryu” Maginn, Takbir “Tak” Bashir, DJ Cheapshot, Vin Skully, and Mike Shinoda, who called themselves the Divine Five. The five of them were all handsome, talented young men who were very popular with the ladies. They were jokers; obnoxious boys who usually got whatever they wanted by any means necessary. They were players, and yet everyone seemed to love them. All accept one person.
Chrissy Baldwin hated Fort Minor High with a passion. She didn’t really fit in with the rest of the students there. While the majority of girls were sluts, Chrissy hated wearing clothing that left you almost stark naked. She didn’t like most of the music that the other students would play; it was all about sex, drugs and money, all discriminating against women. She couldn’t believe that people listened to that ****, let alone sang it. It was horrible, the things she heard kids saying about each other. Stereotyping, blackmailing, all the hate. It was stupid and immature, and Chrissy hated being around it.
“Can you believe them?” Chrissy asked her best friend Tanya Larkins at lunch one afternoon. They were standing by their lockers looking on at Cheapshot and his gang, dancing to hip hop and rapping along to the beat of the music that blared through the hazy summer air. “What a bunch of morons, honestly.” Rolling her eyes, Chrissy opened her locker and shoved her books inside. Tanya crossed her arms and sighed heavily.
“Yeah, well let me tell you, girl, it ain’t gonna change one bit,” she responded. “They ain’t no way those guys are gonna smarten up. Hell, they can’t even dress properly, let alone do well in school. I bet at least half of them drop outta school.” Tanya was on Chrissy’s side when it came to the other students in the school. She, too, couldn’t stand their behaviour most of the time.
“Well, it’s a good thing they don’t talk to us, because I’d sure give them one hell of a beating.” Chrissy closed her locker and her and Tanya set off for the cafeteria. It, like the rest of the school, was old and gross. Chrissy didn’t dare eat anything from the caf, so instead she’d make her own lunches and take them to school. Sitting down on the cleanest chair she could find, she and Tanya began to eat.
“So, how’s everything with Travis?” Chrissy asked her friend anxiously. “Is it anything serious yet?” Tanya’s face seemed to light up at the mention of her boyfriend.
“Oh, yes!” she exclaimed, grinning widely. “Oh, Chrissy, he’s so perfect. I mean, he’s such a gentleman. Dresses fashionably, unlike the guys here. Travis is perfect, Chrissy. Oh, and his huge muscles and cute goatee…” Chrissy could tell that Tanya really liked this guy. Although Chrissy had never met him, he sounded really nice.
“So what about you, Chrissy?” Tanya asked, taking a bite out of her chicken wrap. “You haven’t been with a guy for I don’t know how long. You got your sights set on anyone?” Chrissy smiled and shook her head, brushing back pieces of her long blonde hair.
“Nope. Not yet,” she answered simply. “I don’t think I’ll find any guy around here that’s right for me.” Her voice dropped to a quiet whisper almost as she thought about how true her words were. There was no one really worth dating in town that she knew would be a loyal boyfriend. Tanya reached her dark arm across the table and gently held onto Chrissy’s hand.
“Don’t worry, you’ll find someone. Nothing’s impossible, you know.” Chrissy knew she was right. But at the moment, everything looked pretty bleak. And to dampen her spirits, the Divine Five walked into the caf. Groaning, Chrissy folded her arms on the table and lay her head down. Her ears rung as people started cheering, and Chrissy could hear someone starting a beat. Then the rapping came in, speaking about sex and women in a derogatory way. Slamming her fists down on the table, she stood up and marched over to the five popular young rappers with a look of pure hatred across her face.