Under the leaf

Pheonix791989

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ok this is the new story for our little discombobulated family. before I go into the story, I need to explain some things. If you read Naruto then you have a head start on every one else so skip down to the story. If not these character bios and bits of info will prove to be very usefull in reading the story.

characters:

Naruto: a blond haired boy who loves to play pranks and eat ramen, is a novice Gennin from the hidden leaf village.

Sauske: a boy with an ambition to avenge his family. a novice Gennin from the hidden leaf village carrier of the Sharingan eye (mirror eye)

Sakura: a pink haired girl whos in love with sauske. a novice gennin from the hidden leaf village

Kakashi: sakura, sauske, and naruto's teacher. an elite ninja, jounin, who is also known as the copy ninja from the hidden leaf village had the sharingan eye implanted

Neji Huyga: a powerful master of the soft style martial arts, posseses the Baruyuken or white eye which allows him to see the opponants moves before they can make them

misc info:

styles of the shinobi:

tai-jitsu: the art of the trained body, uses either hard style (normal fighting) or yarikugen a softer style of fighting designed to cause more force then power

Gen-jitsu: the art of illusion.

Nin-jitsu: the art of mastry of elemental energy to preform attacks and healing abilities

Ninja levels:

they start off as acadamy students and then progress to Gennins then to Chunin and finally to Jounin

Chakra:

spritual, mental, and physical energy flowing through ones body. when the spiritual and mental are in harmony with the physical energy then a handsign can be used to bring out the energy ie: Fire style, water style, earth style, wind style

Hand signs:

based on the twelve chinese zodiac signs.

Villages:

the two major villages that have shinobi (ninja) that we will be dealing with are the village hidden in the leaves and the village hidden in the mist.

Bloodlines:

Some families carry a specail power that is unique to the family. It can inhance the users abilities to do something or be a specail attack. ex: Sharingan the mirror wheel eye that can copy and mimic any gen, tai, or nin jitsus and mirror them back to the opponant. the specail blood line that will be shown in this story is an animal transformation bloodline.

Kages- the rulers of the land of shinobis

ok now on to the story in the next post

 

Pheonix791989

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the house was almost dead silent. Rav sighed as she went back to work on the dishes. She was worried. There hadnt been any broken bones, fractures, cuts bruises and/or scratches since her husband left on tour to some distant place, taking his youngest full blooded daughter with him. No, she wasnt worried about her husband or her daughter, Mel, her third born was a trained ninja, but of the blood line that she knew so well. She gave a sigh as she placed more dishes in the dishwasher. Her first and only son, Fribby, had already gone to work, and Fox was putting around the living room trying to find the keys to her motorcycle that her father, chester, had given her as a birthday present.

"Daddy where are we?"

Rob looked out the window into the country side. He then peered good naturedly at his daughter.

"We're in the Fire country. You see that village over there... we gotta stop there for a day or so."

"ok daddy."

Mel, the sixteen year old said. Rob ruffeled her hair. He then raised his eyebrow as he saw a bright blue stripe going across her nose and down on to her cheek bones.

"Where'd ya get that?"

Rob asked. Mel shrugged.

"Uncle mike said it would help me with my ninja studies. Isnt the fire country where Master Ishihara was from?"

Rob chuckeled.

"No he was from the land of mist."

"I miss master. I wish he could have come with us."

Rob chuckeled as the bus came to a stop infront of the village gates. The bus driver muttered something about waiting here. Once mel had run off to put on her headband and ninja sandals, rob swallowed hard. This wasnt the united states. He needed the protection for the band because of his bloodline that made him a wanted man to some of the other shinobi villages. Mike, Joe, chester, and brad were already waiting outside with Mel. Mike smiled at her.

"You look just like a shinobi."

He said as he gave her a punch in the arm.

"I am a shinobi! what are you talking about uncle mike?"

She adjusted the headband that had four lines on its metal plate. Rob smirked as he got off the bus. He handed Mel what looked like a billfold.

"Midget, you forgot this."

He said handing her the ninja pass that all ninja were required to have.

"Lets get moving."

Dave said as he came down the tour bus stares.

"NARUTO!"

A silver haird guy said sternly as he slammed his fist into the blond kids head. The silver haired man sighed as he turned to face lord Hokage.

"You were saying lord hokage?"

"Yes, Kakashi, I have another mission for your cell. Its a very important rank B mission but It also requires that you have Neji Huyga on your team."

"WHAT?! I'm not gonna work with that jerk that almost kille Hinata! Believe it!"

naruto shouted. kakashi rolled his eyes as he plunged his fist into narutos head again. Neji appeared out of the shadows joining Kakashi, naruto, sauske, and sakura.

"calm down naruto,"

Kakashi sighed. he was really gonna get an ear full of it later.

"This is just protection for a group of individuals. but I am certaint that other ninja will try to attack the group for there is a blood line involved that could be disasterous. One of the clients is a sixteen year old Jounin, an elite ninja that holds the bloodline."

Neji frowned. Kakashi beat him to the question

"Lord Hokage, what type of blood line exactly are we dealing with?"

"Are you familiar with the Usagi blood line?"

They nodded silently. This blood line was known to few shinobi less then ten, but it was a deadly line. the person with this bloodline could tap into the wolf spirit and become a werewolf of sorts. Its chakra also delt with more of the water types of ninjitsus.

"Alright lord Hokage, we accept the task."

Kakashi said. Lord Hokage waved his hand.

"Now we'll make the introductions."

ok what do y'all think so far?

 

Ravynlee

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Well, I have to admit, it was hard to read at first, but being that I know absolutely nothing about Naruto and so forth I was kind of scrolling back and forth while I was reading it to get a better understanding of what was going on.

Well what else can I say? Again with the warewolves. *laughs* Hope the big guy doesn't get a complex. For being his arguably most obsessive (LPF) fans, you and I haven't exactly painted Robbie in the most gratuitous of lights lately. Mind you, seeing Rob all pre-transformation and like *growl* I'm more than content with that visual, thanks muchly. Hehehe.

Having said all that I'm okay with this so far. Once it develops and starts to find a rhythm I'm sure I'll get into it more. I'm slowly, very slowly learning.

I love our screwed up family, regardless the guise it's under.

Thanks for helping to keep us alive. Keep up the great work - post more soon or I'll go into withdrawals. Serious. ;)

*tackle hugs*

-Rav

 

Pheonix791989

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well its not really a werewolf... but a demon wolf whom the user can call upon to physically manifest the energy into the body gaining the physical atributes of the demon. and the blue stripe is a bit of a channel for the energy and it also plays a major part in the use of healing chakra
 

Greyfoxx

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Awww.... that was cool.... I like the Shinobi, but tis no fair!!! why are u the one that gets ta be a ninja!??!?! NO FAIR! :( other than that, tis good
 

Pheonix791989

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Naruto frowned at the group of seven. His eyes traveled to the girl who was wearing a headband from the village hidden in the mist. He pointed.

"Why do we have to do it, they already have a ninja with them! Its a waste of time! Believe it!"

"Naruto! Shut up and show some respect!"

Sakura shouted as she clobbered Naruto. Kakashi bowed to the group.

"My name's Hitake Kakashi, we will be the ninja accompanying you on this trip."

Mike smiled as he shook hands with Kakashi.

"This is our little band. We'll be glad to have you on board Master Kakashi."

"I'm very glad. That's naruto, the blond kid, Sakura is the one with pink hair, Sauske is the raven haired boy and finally this is neji."

"Now that we're all well met, we need to move on if we're going to make it to the other village in time."

Kakashi said as he hearded the group out.

Mel was intrigued by the ninjas. She had never met any of them other then her sensei. Her eyes traveled to the back of the bus where her uncles were either sleeping or playing videogames. Her eyes then traveled to the white eyed boy, Neji, who sat on the floor with his eyes shut in meditation, to Naruto, sakura, and sauske who were busy chatting about their mission.

"So your a ninja arnt you?"

Mel looked up to see Kakashi sitting to the side, calmly reading a book titled Make Out Paradice.

"I guess I am. I've never met any ninja other then my teacher."

Mel said as she looked at Kakashi with intrest. Kakashi raised a single eye that wasnt covered by his headband to look mel strait in the face. His eyes traced the blue stripe that ran across her nose.

"Whats the stripe for? Does it help you with your nin-jitsu or are you trying to make a fashion statement?"

"It helps me with my jitsus. My uncle mike taught me how to use it."

she said as she continued to look curiously at Kakashi. She wondered what exactly was behind his mask.

"Mom, when's Mel comming back?"

Fox quipped about her usuaul wresteling mate. Rav shrugged as she continued to work in the kitchen. Fribby came in through the garage door and threw his keys down on the table. He then flopped on the couch like a half empty sack. It was as if an unspoken feeling ran through the room as Rav's oldest daughter Sarah came in the room with books piled high. Rav couldnt help but sigh. She swore to her self that she wouldnt get her kids involved in with this. she didnt want them to take sides in the argument that had followed many vicious battles of words and at one point a fight almost ensued. She had lived almost sixteen years in fear of the bloodline and with much anger at her ever absent husband. Her daughter wouldnt come back, neither would rob. It still didnt keep her from worrying out of maternal instinct.

"I dont know..."

Rav said softly. Fribby stood up to comfort her.

"Its ok mum, we know about what happened."

He said trying to give her a comforting hug.

"How did...."

"Mum, half of LA heard you kick him out."

 

Friðbjörn

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I have to agree with Rav knowing nothing about all this stuff it can be kinda hard to read at times, especially with the new characters.

but hey, it looks very nice so far :)

 

Greyfoxx

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man, why do u post so little?! tis no fair!! but it is good....Neji is cool! :thumbsup: this is cool, its like two fanfics in one! great!!! :thumbsup: <some more thumbsup for u!>
 

Ravynlee

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Agreed - it does read like two fanfics in one. Not necessarily a bad thing, actually quite creative, but having said that... yeah... I like it, but maybe I just need to get better acquainted with the new characters more.

Still, good so far.

-Rav

 

Pheonix791989

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aww thanks guys but i reread it last night and i decided to scrap this story. I have a new one done up and all. so yeah..... thats about all i got.
 

Pheonix791989

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well im gonna do an entirely different one based more on the growing up part of the kids lives. No ninjas or characters some people might not know just us five. but i might still write on this one a little if I suddenly get a bit of inspiration or what not but as of right now I think the story's ****.
 

Friðbjörn

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ok I see.

but come on, this one ain't ****. It's pretty good. It's just kinda hard for an audience completely unfamiliar with half of the subject of it, that's all.

But I do very much like this new idea, I'd definately keep going with that one, regardless what you do decide to do with this one.

 

Ravynlee

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Viking's right - this aint **** - it's original. I like everything you do, you've got a real talent there. It'll probably just take a bit for those of us not in the know to get used to it, that's all.

Having said that - absolutely loving the new one. By far the best so far IMHO.

*blushes* I'm all excited to see where you take it but I'm also nervous cause we all know what's about to happen... enter: Chester. <3 Be still my beating heart! Haha! Hmm...

Anyway, when and if you post more here you know there's always a loyal few who'll still read it. Do what you think is best.

*hugs*

-Rav :D

 

Pheonix791989

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im gonna keep writing on this one but i dont really have anything new for it yet. but i got another idea but it wont be up till tomorrow
 

Pheonix791989

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ok srry for the double post but i had a sudden inspiration so heres a little bit of the story.

"Mom are you gonna be ok?"

Fribby asked as he reached a hand out to give some shread of comfort to his mom.

"Yeah I'm fine. we've been getting along with out him well enough so why should this be any different?"

Rav said, sounding a bit harsher then she intended. Fribby and Fox's eyes were cast downward towards the ground. Sarah muttered something incohearently and the quickly slid out of the room.

-*-

Mel looked at Kakashi strangely once more.

"My master told me stories about you when I was younger. He was part of the assination corps back in the village of the mist. You're the infamous copy ninja."

Kakashi smiled his strange smile.

"Youre well informed."

He muttered turning back to his book. Mel stood up and walked towards the back room where she gave Neji a passing glance. There was something about this boy that intrigued her. His white, cold eyes glared about the room, almost as if he was picking out the individual details of the bus. He took in slow deep breaths. She gave him a smile as his glare turned towards her. She then promptly went into the back room where she sat down and watched the characters dash across the screen in the video game that Chester, Mike and brad were playing. Dave was reclining on the other couch with one of his basses and Joe had his lap top out, working on something for some weird thing. Cheste gave her a nudge with his elbow as he was being slaughtered by brad and mike.

"Come on Mel, come help me out."

Chester whined. Mel chuckeled with her eyes closed.

"ok then."

she deliberatly blinked her eyes and they were no longer brown and black but a blood red with white pupils. She stared intently at both Brad and Mike for a split moment.

"Chester quick move to the right."

Chester smiled widely as he dodged the two missiles that brad and Mike had sent in his direction.

"No fair no jitsus!"

Mike shouted as Mel gave chester more instructions. Chester quickly turned the tables on Mike and Brad.

 
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