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Ravynlee

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Man, how is it we seem to travel very closely on plot ideas and not communicate barely at all for days on end...? Hmm, psychic maybe? Maybe it's natural progression... whatever it is, it's still awesome work. The whole Rav filing for divorce (Why? WHY you stupid SOB?!? *screaming and shaking the snot out of her own fictional persona 0_o *) made me mist up a little. Especially the whole Viking and Mel exchanging comforting hugs as all this **** is going on in front of them... Man, discombobulated family is right.

But the concert sounds like a good idea. Not sure Viking's choice of date is quite him but still, he's probably craving the attention now that his homelife has gone to ****, and as for Mel and Jimmy? Well, we all know about you two... *grins*

Just wondering where Sarah and Fox are at the moment?

Also wondering why Ravyn seemed heel-bent on keeping Mel from Rob when Mel has made it perfectly clear she'd rather be with Rob anyday. Maybe Rav's deliberately out to hurt him? Makes sense from an emotional standpoint. *** knows that sounds like me... hehehe.

Good job as always. Can't wait to read more. You know I live to read your stories.

Take care.

*hugs*

<3 Rav :D

 

Pheonix791989

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glad you like rav. I guess in the future chapters things will get clearer

Boy was I right about alex, she was out of place. not only that but being in a rock concert with two inch heels isnt the smartest thing in the world. Of course Fox was there with Chester. go figure on that one. Fribby, Jimmy, alex and I went up to them.

"Hey fox!"

We had to shout above the roar. Fox smiled and hugged me. Sometimes I think that maybe Fox and I should have been twins instead of me and sarah. Highly unlikely but still a nice thought. Jimmy shook chesters hand, almost making a fool out of himself infront of his idol. I couldnt help but laugh. Jimmy and chester were almost exactly like me and Ville from HIM.

"When's the interview?"

"Tomorrow! Its just dave, Rob and Mike. You guys ready to have some fun?"

"Hells yeah!"

Jimmy and I shouted as we pumped our fists into the air. I saw the look that Chester gave Alex. It was a look like I've seen that *** and those jugs before type of look. Jimmy and I jumped up and down like mad men as the band started up playing our favorite song, Minority. We jumped up and down as it came to the last chorus of the song, flipping the band off with a roar of '**** them all!' The band slowed as I leaned back into Jimmy's arms. Why is it that Jimmy and I can get along so well? I mean thinking about it wernt we pretty much like my mom and dad? Rav's an aussie who just had it bad durring her life and Rob was a drummer from a good family. if we can get along then why cant they? Makes no sense what so ever. I looked over at an annoyed fribby who looked at his "date" as she was on her cell phone examining her perfectly manicured nails. Atleast I was having fun. Finally fribby seemed to get the idea. He plowed his way over towards us while we jumped up and down with another high energy song. We jumped up and down in rythem with the song.

As fribby drove back up the driveway things were silent. It was a nice break from real life for a moment but we were brough down with a bump. As bad as that was, maybe we could find something to salvage out of this huge clusterfuck.

"Mel, Do you want to live with dad?"

Fribby asked as he shut off the engine and we sat in silence.

"Why do you want to know?"

I asked maybe a tad bit too defensively. Fribby sighed.

"Well its just... I know mom misses you but you seem to be the only thing that dad understands or seems to want out of this family."

Fribby said a tad bit sourly.

"Are you mad at me for it?"

I asked a bit timidly. No matter how many years I've had of martial arts, it will never, I repeat NEVER be enough to keep fribby from kicking my ***.

"Not mad. Jealous is a better word for it, but then again, you've always been daddy's little girl."

Fribby snorted. I sighed, I felt like everyone in this family hated me. I felt like I was close to tears. I just wanted to crawl into a ball and die. When ever it seems that im trying to do something helpful or right, I manage to screw it up royaly. Now I was entirely screwed over with my brother, the one person that i looked up to more then my dad. But I guess birds of a feather must flock together, so My dad and I were a perfect pair. I got out of Fribby's old car and ran up to the room that I shared with him. I burried my face into my precious stuffed animals back.

 

Friðbjörn

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o.0

I'm wondering if you two following similar paths in story making can be compared to those things when close female friends syncronize their um...periods (right? that's the word I think)

just for the record, what exactly does discombobulated mean?

Edit: great chapter Mel, short, but very much to the point, and a lot said, though in few words

 
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Ravynlee

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o.0I'm wondering if you two following similar paths in story making can be compared to those things when close female friends syncronize their um...periods (right? that's the word I think)

just for the record, what exactly does discombobulated mean?
Discombobulate - adj - to throw into a state of confusion. Confused.

And as for the other point? That's always a possibility :D

 

Pheonix791989

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but dont go as far as to plan periods >< I dont need the back pain more then usuaul. but im glad you enjoied it but yeah it seems that we women/girls/females thingk along the same lines. its called a womans sixth sense i guess
 

Pheonix791989

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I woke up the next morning to the sound of yelling. My first guess was that Grandma Bourdon was here. My seccond was that Dad was there. I got up sleepily and headed down stairs. It was none of my guesses. **** it was the last person on earth I thought I'd see Rav fighting with. To my amazement, it was uncle Joe. Joe rubbed his temples with his hand before Mum had another go at him.

"Look Rav, your like a sister to me and to the guys but you cant do this to rob. It would break whats left of his heart."

Joe said trying desperatly to reason with her.

"I take it your assuming that he had a heart to begin with?"

Rav snarled back at Joe. This seemed to be the straw that broke the camels back for joe.

"Why are you so determined to hurt him? Why are you so set on trying to tear their relationship apart? They need each other."

Joe shouted back at Rav with almost equal force. I had never seen my mom so angry.

"Its nothing you would understand Joe"

Rav screamed. I turned and ran back upstairs and hurriedly got dressed before grabbing my skateboard. I could still hear Joe and Rav's voices downstairs. I opened the window that led out to a soft patch of grass a story below my window. Someone's hand grabbed me.

"Where do you think your going?"

"None of your **** business fribby"

I snapped as I wrenched my shoulder out of his grasp and I lept out the window, landing lightly below. I skated down the nearest sidewalk and out of the neighborhood. I went in some random direction. It would take that squealer fribby a good fifteen to twenty minutes before he could get through to mum. I personally have learned that it'd be better to head her off early before she gets botteled up like that and then explodes. She could go on forever. I couldnt go back right now. **** there were many places I could go but none of them seemed right. I just let my skateboard take me where ever it wanted. Some how I ended up in downtown LA infront of a large music store. This cop stopped me. he had a bald head and a beer gut to match.

"Do you know your in violation of the law? there is no skateboarding allowed on the sidewalks!"

The cop said as he snatched me up by the arm in a vise like grip.

"Hey let me go!"

I protested as I tried to free my arm. About right then, I was about to use the first Jitsu that came to my mind.

"Dont you like touch her!"

I looked up to see this big afro comming my way. I was saved! Uncle Big Bad to the rescue.

"Do you know this kid sir?"

The fat *** asked with an emphasis on the word sir.

"Yes this is my daughter and I'll like thank you not to grab her like that. Come on Mel."

Brad said as he rescued me from the fat ***. we were a good block away before Brad turned to me.

"You like gotta be more careful Mel. That cop could have like done alot worse then arrest you."

"I owe ya uncle brad, but I just wanna go to the ledges."

I said softly as I lowered my eyes from his gaze.

"Yeah sure and like chester just sprouted wings from his ***"

He said sarcastically as he unlocked his car and put his guitar(s) in the back.

"Really? can I go join him?"

I said with my voice dripping with more sarcasim.

"Spill."

Brad said as he offered me a soda. I took it greatfully. my throat was all dried out and sore. I took a long drink.

"Mum was fighting with uncle joe and theres just a bunch of **** at the moment."

I said trying to avoid the subject with out too much success. Brad smiled at me.

"Maybe you and I should like go for a walk out on the pier."

"Its a long story uncle brad."

"well its a very big pier."

We walked in silence for another ten minutes before Brad gave me a look that made me spill everything to him.

"well Mum and dad are getting divorced and I feel like its my fault. But theres nothing I can do to fix their relationship. Fribby hates me because HE wanted to be daddy's favorite and I know that mum compleatly dispises me for wanting to be with dad so she's trying to keep me from being with him. I want to make everyone happy but I dont think its possiable."

I sobbed as I broke down compleatly. Brad pulled me into a sympathetic hug.

"Man I dont think that like anyone should feel that at the same time. Its gotta be like sensory overload. I dont blame you for like breaking down or being on edge."

Brad said as he handed me a tissue out of his jacket pocket.

"But as far as like Rob and Rav goes, I know it sucks that you like feel helpless but you gotta stay strong."

I held my head in my hands.

"Rob like loves you to the end of the earth and so does your mom. Its a tough decission to have to like choose between your two parents, But you have to stop thinking about them and like follow your heart if that like makes any sense."

I blinked as I tried to make sense out of what Brad said. After replaying what he said in my head with out all the 'likes' it made compleat sense to me. I started laughing at Uncle Brads way of thinking.

"But that still dosent tell me what I should do."

 

Ravynlee

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I blinked as I tried to make sense out of what Brad said. After replaying what he said in my head with out all the 'likes' it made compleat sense to me. I started laughing at Uncle Brads way of thinking.
That cracked me up. I can so imagine it... how frustrating would that be to be having a serious conversation and be distracted by all these 'likes'... man... funny though.Yes, very serious subject matter but you're exploring it nicely. I love the drama, you know me, but the injection of humour keeps it strong. A lot like RL; people often crack jokes in awkward situations as a way of coping, so very well observed. Poor Mel, carrying the burden of her parents rift on her shoulders alone as she is... Hmm. As far as the Rav and Joe arguement - I can see that too. Joe must have a serious side, and when it comes to one of his closest friends I think it would come out. Rav being the hot-headed ***** makes perfect sense too... she'd be feeling alone and bitter enough as it is, feeling like it's at least the 6 of them against her and trying to keep the kids level to some degree... man, tense. But cool! Love it as always. If you knew how often I re-read this story over and over at times... I love it, really.

Great work. Can't wait to see how they sort this out or even if they do.

Look at it this way - nothing like a little angst to make good music, eh?

 

Pheonix791989

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Brad brought me back to the apartment that Rob and I were in the process of moving into. The door was open and It looked like Chester was helping move boxes into the apartment.

I smiled as I then helped him put together an old bookshelf. After we finished the construction and many swear words later from chester, I started putting books from a box with my name marked on it. I couldnt help but wonder about my taste in authors and books. I have no idea where some of them came from. There were many volumes of classic books such as Robin Hood and The Three Musketeers, my heavier books such as the compleat works of Poe and Robert Frost. Then there were my other books on many subjects from a Dummies guide to drumming to the LP book to many music books like Scar Tissue by Anthony Kedis of the Red Hot Chili Peppers, Many books on Kurt Cobain and then the more contriversial books such as Night by Elie Weisel or Freedom From Fear or even my personal favorite book series, the resident evil series. Brad came in with another couple of boxes with my named marked on them. He set them down with a groan as he then picked up the top book from another box.

"Einstein's Space & Van Gogh's Sky? Why on earth are you like reading something like this?"

Embarrassed, I snatched the book from his hands.

"That's for my AP Physics class."

I said with a sheepish look on my face.

"Well it like seems that something like this should be in like a psychology class."

Brad said as he flipped through the well thumbed pages. I couldnt help but blush.

"You sure are like alot smarter then people like to think you are."

Brad said as he set the book on my bookshelf.

"Thats what my dad keeps telling me."

I said softly. I pulled open a box of Manga where I started putting the books in order by genre then by number in the series.

"Your a smart kid, dont let anyone tell you otherwise."

Brad said as he helped chester put together a bedside table.

"Big bad did you just say an entire sentance with out the word like in it?"

Chester asked incredicuously. Brad rolled his eyes at the older man.

"Shove it chaz. go and like alert the media."

Brad said as he flipped chester off.

"Dude, I so dont swing that way."

Chester snorted. After another few hours in some feeble attempt at an escape for what I was going to face once I got back to Rav's house.

"Brad, would you mind dropping me off at the ledges?"

I was refering to the dogtown ledges that were on the outskirts of Santa Monica, near the beach, which was almost a twenty minute drive from here.

"Not at all. Do you want me to pick you up?"

I shook my head.

"Shawn or Jimmy'll give me a ride home."

I said. Brad smiled as he handed me my board and then he handed me a long thin box.

"Think of this as your early birthday present."

I picked up the box and sat on the floor and slowly unwrapped it. My heart almost stopped. It was an original Z-boys fish style skateboard. These things were rare and expensive as ****. I was still in silence as Brad drove me out to the beach. Sure enough as I guessed, Jimmy was there as well as my other two best friends, Shawn and Will. Shawn was the oldest of our group and was a senior, will was a red headed mexican and jimmy was just jimmy, nothing out of the ordinary. Shawn gave me a slap on the back as Brad drove off.

"I was starting to think you wernt gonna come out on such a beautiful day."

"sorry I had to move some stuff in my dads new apartment."

I said as I borrowed Will's skate key and cleaned out my berings in my wheels.

"So are your parents like officialy split?"

"shut up. we didnt come here to talk, we came here to skate."

Shawn almost barked at Will. jimmy was messing around with his camera. I shook my head as I skated up almost parallel to the long curving bench and ollied up. I hoped that my board came down right. My back foot missed it as I came down painfully on my knee. There was an audiable crack as I brought my arms in and leaned more towards my right shoulder, my hand that I didnt use as much. I winced as my arm was skinned by the cement. Everything seemed to stop. The other three just stood there with their mouths open before Jimmy rushed right towards me. He then shouted at Will to get the first aid kit that was in his backpack. Tears welled up in my eyes from the pain in my knee. I almost passed out from what I saw. The whole skin covering on my knee was peeled back and you could see the muscle and the shattered bits of bone poking through.

"****."

I muttered as I handed my cell phone to Shawn who was closest to me.

"Call chester. Hit the green button then hit 4. its his number on speed dial. tell him not to tell my mom"

I said, my voice shaky from the adrenaline leaving my system and shock. Will was busy calling for an ambulance. I didnt want Rav to know I had been hurt cuz then she would launch into this whole thirty hour long lecture. I knew chester would know what to do. Sure enough within twenty minutes, Chester was there with Brad, Joe and fox in tow. Chester imedeatly took charge of everything as soon as the ambulance arrived. They strapped me down to the bed thing and chester rode with me in the ambulance.

"I called Rob, he said he'd catch the next flight out of seattle. Dave and Mike will stay to do the interview and then come and see you."

He said as the paramedics tried to stop the bleeding in my knee. By now my body was numb to the pain from the anastetics that they gave me.

"This cant happen Chaz. I dont know what the **** I'll do if I cant ever play drums again!"

I said almost hysterically. He squeezed my hand.

"You'll be able to play again. I promise it."

Then they said that they'd have to do surgery on my knee to take out the shards of my broken knee cap and then do another surgery to replace the knee cap. The minute they got me in a room, chester looked at me.

"You know I have to tell your mother about this right?"

"Yeah but cant you wait till I'm knocked out before you tell her?"

Chester chuckeled. I still couldnt feel my lower body.

"We'll see. Atleast we'll wait till rob gets back here."

I nodded as they put me asleep for the operation to take all the fragments out of my knee. When I was almost compleatly under, Someone squeezed my hand. When I came too, Rob and Jimmy were both in the room.

"I'm sorry daddy."

I said feebily as my vision still swam back and forth. He smiled at me before he kissed my forehead.

"Dont worry kiddo. Its all good, I promise. "

Rob said as he rubbed my hand.

"I dont want you to be mad at me for making you miss the interview. "

"You're more important then some stupid interview. Mike and Dave are on now if you want to watch them."

Rob said as he flipped the TV channels. Jimmy helped me prop my bed up to watch the interview.

"So I thought Rob was suposed to be with you two."

The interviewer said.

"Well he had something come up back home with his daughter. But we're here."

Mike said.

"Alright then So Dave what do you think about all of the hubub about Jay-Z Joining your band?"

"Even though He was a pretty cool guy, hes not in the band. Our newest album will be out in spring some time."

"So tell me more about what happened to Rob's daughter."

"Well chester called us that she shattered her knee skateboarding."

Mike said. I rolled my eyes. Great now the whole world knows about my injury.

"ouch that sounds painful. Now there are roumers circulating around the internet that Rob and his wife are getting a divorce, is any of that true?"

"Nothing is certaint. Rob loves his daughters, his son and his wife almost as much as drumming."

"Now I want to know more about the sound that your new albums gonna have. "

I grabbed the remote and clicked the tv off.

"Do y'all ever get asked something even slightly interesting?"

Rob looked thoughtfull.

"Well there was this one question that I got asked. If I was stranded on a deserted island who in the band would I like to be stranded with."

I laughed and then winced from jarring my knee.

"who did you pick?"

"Uncle Joe because I'd have *** knows how much food to eat when I kill him."

"daddy?"

"Yeah Mel?"

"please dont tell mom."

 

Greyfoxx

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yea, thats some good writin sis, funny, to painful...dannggg... now my knee hurts..(but thats cause it always does.)
 

Pheonix791989

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I woke up the next morning to see what looked like a flower shop explosion in my room. I groaned and sat up slightly. Rob was asleep in the plastic recliner while Jimmy was curled up in a wooden chair beside my bed. I ignored the shooting pains in my knee. As far as I was awear I still had no knee cap.

"What the **** happened?"

I asked looking around at all the flowers. There were teddy bears and assorted stuffed animals, some holding hearts and others saying get well. Rob stirred slightly as he sat up with his hair all messed up.

"Christ! where did all of this come from?"

He asked, echoing my previous question. He looked at the nearest plant.

"To melissa, a speedy recovery from your Art teacher."

He read out loud.

"See I told you that when Dave said that the whole world would know about it."

I said making my point clear. Rob nodded. Up untill now, my family was pretty much sheltered from the public eye. Now it was like everytime Rob took a **** it was on the news. I eyed the huge white tiger that was set infront of my bed in the corner behind the door.

"Daddy, who's that one from?"

I asked pointing. Rob got up and checked the tag.

"Its from all your uncles."

He said as he continued to step over plants. He looked through them untill he found what he was looking for.

"This one's from me. Happy valentines day mel."

He said as he put the lone venus flytrap on the window sill. I couldnt help but roll my eyes. First off I dont really particularly enjoy valentines day and seccond, a venus flytrap?! my dad had the weirdest sense of humor. but hey I still loved him... most days I think.

"dad, you are one strange guy. that must be why you fit in with uncle chester and uncle joe."

I said. Jimmy stirred from his position in the wooden chair. He looked around in the room with his now natural hair color all tosseled up.

"Jesus in ****! What kind of commie made your room a rainforest?!"

"No clue, but my dad got me a venus flytrap."

"dude totally wicked."

Jimmy had left for a few moments to go the the cafeteria. Rob lovingly kissed the top of my head. The door swung open and the satrine atmosphere returned. The look on my brothers face seemed to portend the impending doom. Rob stood up quickly as Rav came in the room. Almost as instantly as my false naive sense of happiness came, I returned back to my usuaul depressing slough. I gave my mum the normal, lackadaisical greeting.

"Look where your recklessness has landed you!!"

She said with a voice almost close to a shout. I shrugged it off. Right now she was my public enemy number one, trying to rip me away from my rock and source of strength. I wouldnt let that happen. I would fight it untill I won or I died trying. That was how I was trained, in relentless fighting. Rav rounded on Rob

"You call yourself her father! how could you let her do that?!?"

Almost in a flash, Rob's calm cool facad dropped.I never heard him raise his voice.

"Ravyn I was all the way in seattle, how could I prevent it?!"

"You should still have done something!"

"You were the one suposed to be watching her!!"

 

Pheonix791989

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They had done an extreamly good job on my knee. A good enough job that I was able to go home with out crutches. My knee hurt extreamly bad but not as bad as the first time I had to have it operated on. My muscles strained as I pulled my self out of Rob's SUV with some dificulty. Jimmy helped me get upstairs to grab the last of my stuff including my beloved Haku wall scroll and my squishy rob. I heard a fight ensue downstairs over my custody. The looks from my brother were enough to make me want to roll up and die. Jimmy took my box of my last few things out to my daddys car.

"Ravyn why are you trying to do this to me?!"

"You have no right to call your self her father!"

Rav screamed back at him. Rob was looming over her but the force and decibles of her screams matched chesters.

"I Love her and you cant take that away from us!"

"Stop thinking that everythings about you! This is about Melissa and her well being!"

"Do you think she wants to be with you right now? She can hear us fighting about this! You want to pull her away from something that she loves more than anyting! You think shes gonna just return to you with open arms?"

"Im her mother she'll just have to deal with it!"

"*** **** it she's old enough to choose for herself what she wants! Why is she any different from fox? Your letting that brat stay with chester so Mel is well enough off to stay with me!"

"Dont you dare drag fox into this you **** off!"

"I'll drag her into this if I ******* want to! She's even worse then mel is about getting into fights!"

I started trembeling as the picture frame in my hands started shaking and quivering. All of this is happening because of me. I cant show emotion, I cant show my weakness. After al of the injuries that I've had, the injuries that have caused me to walk more slowly and have set back my training by weeks, I never once showed emotion through them. I was never scared or showed pain. I have to stay strong for my dad, for my dream. The muscled in my leg started hurting from my position where I was standing. The edge of the frame was cutting into my hand. I felt something hot prickle my eyes. ****. I dropped the picture, not stopping to watch it shatter on the floor as I ran past jimmy despite the pain in my leg. The shouting ceased as I continued to run. Jimmy and Rob shouted behind me as I continued to push my weak muscles harder and harder. I'm a ninja, I'm suposed to be strong and resiliant. I continued to run as I focused all my energy into my lungs and legs. Then I collapsed into a familiar green grassey front yard. I ran all th way to Brad's house which wasnt that far but almost a mile and a half. Brad came running out onto his front lawn as he then tried to help me get up.

"Your like a total mess Mel, what's wrong?"

I shook my head as I tried to hold back the tears.

"When I was still a low level ninja, I memorised the 100 rules of ninja conduct and I always wrote them out with pride..."

My voice quivered as tears started streaming down my face.

"one day when we had a test, I always had perfect scores, the question was what was the 25th rule of conduct..."

I broke out sobbing as Brad pulled me into a hug.

"I wrote it like always, a Ninja must never show emotion because enemies may take this as a weakness. I'm weak, I cant take this any more! Its all my fault!"

I sobbed into uncle brad.

"So this is the terrible destiny of the ninja? Not being able to show emotion is just plain cruel."

 
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