Sea of Blood

Pheonix791989

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Rob sat infront of the door with his arms crossed. He was nodding in and out of sleep. he had been here for almost twelve hours strait. Brad came down the hall and sat down beside Rob.

"Hey buddy, You look tired."

Rob smiled tiredly. Brad seemed to be his only friend amongst the madness that had enveloped his life. Brad had ended up just like Rob had, being in the wrong place at the wrong time and getting infected for it. Dave infected the both of them as a werewolf.

"I heard you challenged Dave to a dominance fight. I sure as **** hope you know what the **** your doing."

Brad patted the younger man on the back and leaned back against the door.

"In all honesty, I have no ******* idea what the **** im doing. I know dave can rip me to shreads I dont know what came over me. Now im up **** creek with out a canoe or a padle."

"You were just trying to protect her."

Rob snorted in a very wolf-like way.

"Atleast when you had your first fight for dominance, you had atleast a year or so of experiance."

Brad sighed as he rubbed the scars where he had been slashed to ribons by dave.

"May I offer some advice?"

"If you must."

Rob muttered as he tried to keep from falling asleep.

"You marked her as your mate, despite what happens at the dominance fight, Ken will see you through it. Just show her how to do things."

Brad said as he got up and left his friend.

"By the way, rob, dave's more inclined to defend his right side since he plays bass right handed. "

Brad continued down the stairs and rob heard the door close. Suddenly a scream ripped through his sensative ears. Rob charged in the room ready to fight off an attacker. There was no one in the room, but Rob knew something was wrong. Ken was no where to be seen. Rob searched the room and found her in the space between her bed and the window. Using his shoulder, he forced the bed out of the way.

"Come on Ken, dont worry, it'll all be over soon."

He said in a soothing voice as he narrowly avoided being swiped with her growing claws.

"Rob i dont want to die."

the meek voice came from the shaking body.

"Dont worry I wont let you die."

Suddenly Rob felt as if he was on the outside looking in at what happened to him. In a way it was sickening, but he couldnt look away. She was in the same position that he had been in three weeks ago.

"Everythings gonna be fine."

He reassured her as she finished changing. She was much like him except a good deal smaller. Rob closed his mind and then focused on his changes. It was becomming easier to him to change from human to wolf. But going back was still taking him some time. He used his snout to nudge her carefully. She reared up and snapped at him. They tusseled for a moment when rob loomed over her on all fours with his tail held high in a sign of dominance. Rob shook himself off breifly while the door opened slowly. The two werewolves froze hoping to *** it wasnt jason or Mike's parents. But it was Just mike and his girlfriend Kelly. Mikes eyebrows flew up near his hair line.

"I'll let you two alone, I trust you will uhh show her to hunt and all."

Mike said to rob before closing the door again. Rob pulled gently on Ken's ear to gain her attention and nudge her to follow him. She tried to stand up, but she wasnt used to her legs yet, so she fell with a loud thump, making the house shake. While sitting on his haunches, Rob used his forepaws to help her steady her self. They went out the window. Rob started running towards the desert. Ken was running behind him, keeping up with him better then he had with Brad his first time.

 

Ravynlee

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Man *grins* I've never wanted to be a warewolf so much in my entire life.

But honestly, you write it in such a way that you can appreciate their struggles, you have an empathy for your characters, and dare I say it do for the WW what Anne Rice did for the Vampire - made them more 'human.' Very well done. :thumbsup:

 

Pheonix791989

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im glad you enjoied it ill post more when I can since im in school and all >< I wanted to stay home and sleep and yeah im super bored.
 

Ravynlee

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Man - I wish. It's nearly 3:30 am here and my last RDO (the equivalent to the average person's Sunday) I spent most of the day writing... now I prolly need to get some sleep and re-energize to do more later on tonight.

But love what you have here so far. Awesome. Like I said, it's got such a sense of heart that the line between villan and do-gooder is almost non-existant. Keeps the reader on their toes. I really admire that. Can't wait for more, y'know me.

Have a fun day! :D

*squeeze hugs*

-Rav

 

Pheonix791989

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Rob looked up from the meal of cyote that Ken brought down for them. She had done well with the few pointers Rob had given her. She was learning fast. Rob streached and then flopped down on a nice patch of grass that was just outside the woods. For once in his life he was semi happy about his predicament.

Chester was with Fox and mike out feeding. Chester swooped down on his target with grace as he compleatly drained them and threw the body in a dumpster. Fox joined him down in the alley way.

"Great now you have hooker breath."

Fox said as she went to kiss him. Mike rolled his eyes.

"Mike what's wrong, you look worried. even worse then when Joe almost knocked out half our food supply."

Chester said, genuinely worried about his friend.

"I just hope what I did was right, vampire and werewolf arent suposed to mix in the same family. "

Chester put a hand on his friends shoulder.

"Things will turn out alright. She's strong. just like you."

"More then you think."

Mike muttered as Joe decended into the alley way looking very pleased with himself.

"great here comes the number one hyperactive knuckle headed vampire."

Fox groaned.

"Why thanks its nice to see you too. Mike I have a report."

"Fire away."

Mike said keeping his voice low. Chester chuckled and rolled his eyes at Joe's loud and boisterious act.

"I saw Rob and Ken huntting in the woods, it looks like Ken brought down the cyote quickly. I dont know what rob's teachin her, but he ought to keep it up."

"Thats good."

Mike said softly, looking at his watch. **** it was almost 2 am.

"I have to get going if I want to stay awake for school."

Chester smirked.

"Just drink a frappichino like I do. that always works."

"Yeah but it also makes you a hyper little *******."

Mike retorted and walked off.

"See you guys in the morning."

Rob changed back to human form in the bedroom that Ken shared with Mike. Once he was fully human, he then turned to Ken who now stood at about a half a foot taller then him.

"This part is the easiest part. Its not painful at all, it just takes a bit of time, dont rush it or else you could end up with a wolf head or something."

Ken nodded and closed her eyes. Rob couldnt help but smile. She made the transformation look like a graceful art the way she merged the wolf body into the human body flawlessly. Rob caught her before her legs gave way.

"That can happen some times. Just be careful now for the next days. Your senses will be hightened but the super sensative ears can be a pain."

Rob helped her into bed. She smiled at him before instantly falling into a deep sleep.

 

Greyfoxx

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hehe... nice update... its good to see that Ken is getting used to being a werewolf.... and chester has hooker breath! lmao... Anyways very good! must have more!
 

Ravynlee

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Yes, the hooker breath line cracked me up. Joe being a hyperactive knuckle-head vampire (so can see it) and poor Mike... despite the fact he appears to be the coven master for want of a better word, it's nice to see the predicaments and pressures he's faced with rather than just leave him to be a bad guy for bad guy's sake.

And dayum! I still wish I were Ken, despite all that horrid physical transformations... mmm... ******* Bourdon... *fans self*

You write very good - very moving indeed! :thumbsup:

As usual, can't wait for more!

-Rav

 

Ravynlee

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And honestly, what would you expect from me? *innocent stare*

Still, I stand by my convictions... *still fanning self and grinning like an idjit at the mental imagery* Day-um!

 

Pheonix791989

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ok heres the next part

Mike felt uneasy as he tried to sleep. Ken was in her own bed beside his sleeping peacfuly in her own happy world. Despite the soft zephyr that blew through the opened window, the heat and the humidity in the room made him feel like he was being sufficated. Mike rolled over facing Ken's bed trying to find the cool spot on the pillow as he started to think about things. 'maybe I was wrong to ask for her to do this. She's been through too much' he thought.

*flashback*

Mike heard something echoing through the pounding rain drops in the alley way. The skin on the back of his neck prickeled up and he could feel his skin crawl because of the acrid putrid smell that seemed to sufficate his nose. Mike ran. The smell and sound followed. His heart was pounding up in his head and his throat ached from lack of fluids, but still he ran. He dashed into the park and fought wildly against the trees who's branches tore at his clothes. He tripped and fell into a hole that seemed to appear out of the ground instantly, swallowing him whole with a mouth like a snake. Mike was scared. It seemed that **** itself was living in the sewers under the streets of LA. Black sillouettes loomed against the background of fire as mike tried to find a way out. out of the six shadows one stepped forward with his half decayed hand extended twords mikes throat.

"Michael Kenji Shinoda, you are here by found Guilty of having an unpure heart."

Mikes eyes dashed back and forth tyring to find a way out. He started crying. None of this made sense to him and he was scared. Shriveled hands crawled their way out of the ground and clasped on to his arms and legs like clamps and white hot iron chains snaked their way around his body, twisting and turning as if they were alive.

"Your sentance is to live for ever as an undead vampire..."

Mike gasped inaduiably as he struggeled against his bonds.

"...and to have your twin to forget who you are."

Mike screamed as the chains left their marks and he cried to see the vision of his sister being sent away all the way across the world.

"KENJI!!!"

*end flashback*

"KENJI!"

Mike screamed as he shot up out of his covers. Ken sat up sleepily.

"what mike? I'm right here, dont scream."

Mike let out a shaky breath. His body trembeled as Ken stood up and sat down beside mike. Ken pulled him into a hug.

"I'm not going any where mike."

"I know ken I know."

He said as he hugged her back. It hurt him deeply to hold his secret, but she wouldnt remember.

 

Ravynlee

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Whoa! You write so... descriptively... the scenery is awesome, visual, dark, ominous. I could see it as clear as anything in my mind as I read it... Very haunting indeed.

As for Mike and Kenji being twins...? Some would say that strengthens the bonds between them, and it does explain why he's suffering as he is, despite the choices he's imposing on her. I'd hate to be in his predicament.

*tears for Mikey*

Awww.

Again, well written. Can't wait to see where you take this... :thumbsup:

 

Pheonix791989

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They sat inside the auditorium with the rest of their friends in their little group. Rob and Dave stayed their distances from each other, making everyone else a little uneasy. Then it was almost like a bomb was dropped and an angry teacher came into the auditorium shouting and cursing. Ken winced as her ears ached. Rob told her this would happen for a couple of weeks but she'd get used to it.

"...I dont want anyone comming back here and messing up my sound board!"

the teacher shouted as he tried to figure out what was wrong with it. Chester s******ed.

"Looks like Lady Lloyd is on the rag."

He said sarcastically. Ken raised an eyebrow.

"Who's the bloke?"

"That's mr Lloyd the chorus teacher. I swear he's gay."

"Hold on a moment."

Ken stood up and went over to the sound board and looked at mr lloyd.

"lets see. punch this and then this and then turn that *** a quarter turn to the right."

Ken said. Mr Lloyd took the suggestion and then tested the mic. It made Ken's ears wince.

"How did you do that?"

"Its simple enough, the one I learned on back home in Oz was more complicated then that."

Then the principal walked in through the double doors and was about to ask Mr Lloyd something and Mr Lloyd shook his head.

"If you want anything done about this sound system, talk to her."

Mr Lloyd handed a small ring of keys to Ken and stormed off. The principal looked at her,

" Can you come tonight to work the sound for Asia night?"

"I'll have to talk it over with me mates but I'll try."

Ken went back to her friends.

"What was that about?"

"I guess Im the new sound techie."

She said holding up the keys. Then the blond girl from the other day that Ken recognized as Susan came up to rob and started hanging all over him. It made her blood boil.

"Hey Robbie, I missed you yesterday."

She said as she stuck her lip out and pouted. Rob brushed her off.

"Stop it Susan."

He said as he leaned closer to Ken. Susan continued to hang on Rob.

"Susan..."

Rob said in a warning voice.

"What's wrong Robbie? You used to be so much more fun before that little **** came in."

Mike and rob jumped up in a flash.

"Dont talk about my cousin that way!"

"You have no right to talk about my mate like that!"

They roared at almost the same time. Susan's bottom lip quivered as she ran out of the room with her posse in tow.

"You shouldnt have done that, you should have just let me deal with her."

Ken said quietly. The group sat silently for a moment.

"she still had no right to talk to you like that."

Rob muttered, finally breaking the silence.

 

Ravynlee

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Awww... he's marking his territory!

As for Mike... blood is thicker than water, huh? *lol*

Couldn't help myself.

But still... very cool! Thankies!

 
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