{Wood'z Journal Act 2}

[Jeezy]

I'd maybe cut the part that begins with "Those who falter"

 


It just gets to long for a summary imo

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

So it's like

The Third World War was brutal.

Millions of American men lost their lives fighting in Asia and in Europe.

But the superpower that rose after the Third World War has now done more damage to each individual than anyone could picture Utopia to be framed as.

Welcome to the future.

Los Angeles is now the City of Fallen Angels instead of the City of Angels.

Halos choke the city instead of glamourising the horizons.

Darkness is the new light.

Lies are the new oxygen.

Greenhouse gases have been replaced with neon billboards while freedom and individualism have been replaced with suppression and conformity. A global corporation now controls minds with propaganda and drugs, doused with deceit and hypocrisy.

Now a group of people, who are hated by society for what they believe in, must rise against the global corporation to try and gain a better world order. Lives will be lost and hearts will shed more blood, as the fight for the Old World begins.

Better?

 

[Jeezy]

So it's like
The Third World War was brutal.

Millions of American men lost their lives fighting in Asia and in Europe.

But the superpower that rose after the Third World War has now done more damage to each individual than anyone could picture Utopia to be framed as.

Welcome to the future.

Los Angeles is now the City of Fallen Angels instead of the City of Angels.

Halos choke the city instead of glamourising the horizons.

Darkness is the new light.

Lies are the new oxygen.

Greenhouse gases have been replaced with neon billboards while freedom and individualism have been replaced with suppression and conformity. A global corporation now controls minds with propaganda and drugs, doused with deceit and hypocrisy.

Now a group of people, who are hated by society for what they believe in, must rise against the global corporation to try and gain a better world order. Lives will be lost and hearts will shed more blood, as the fight for the Old World begins.

Better?

Yeah I think that's cool

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

Hehehe thanks for the help Jeez.

 

[littleblackstone]

really cool

great job

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

Thankies lbs. I now have the prologue up on lpf in its own special thread.

 

[littleblackstone]

Thankies lbs. I now have the prologue up on lpf in its own special thread.

yeah i saw that

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

I had no clue how to write a prologue, I still kinda don't, but I reckon that was a pretty good attempt. I had to even look up the word to actually know what it meant *lol*

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

Well the dog that followed me home last night back from the shops has somehow managed to get inside the gates of the house I am staying at...woke up at 2 pm went down to get some food into me and there it was, a Blue Heeler, it looks like it just came out from being a pup....it's very playful and al.........over-happy,is the word.

Okay I'm still pulling out pics from my harddrive, didn't know I stil had these to be honest.

YAY! The last day of year 12 lunch. Cassie & I (yr 12 drama teacher we're still friends!)

**** wind/sun

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YAY! The last day of year 12 lunch. From left to right, Me (trying to bend down), Tabitha (sticking her head in) and Alyssia (look spastic as usual!)

**** short people make me look fat....

I had to bend down and try to hold the camera at the same time.

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Yes my hair is one colour....I dyed it back to brownish/redish that time before that I had bleached hair.

Me & Rudgey (Samantha) @ at the dinner the previous night

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Rissa and I !!!! (One of my best friends)

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Me, Beatrice (we called her B Machine hahaha) and Heather one of my other best friends.

**** I don't have a pic of Mendes and I on this night.

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Kate!! Get out of the way of the group photo!!

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from right

Front Row - Heather and I

Second Row - Rachel, Stevie, Alice

Third Row - Adam, Kirsty, Rissa, Beatrice and Grant

Mendes and Tabitha were the only ones outta our group that was missing from the photo.

Me bored ages ago.

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[FireHawk]

wow you have more pics of yourself on LPF than I probally have of me at all lol

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

you have not seen my harddrive hahaha. I think I have more photos of myself/with people than I do of music, and I have about 7.29 GBs of music currently in my iTunes.

And that's not including my photography. My avy was in my portfolio which scored me a place at TAFE (a tertiary college here) AND university. That bunch that the avatar is in was all handheld and of me!

 

[FireHawk]

SO wait you hvae more than 7.3GB of photos

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

Most probs of me/with people/of my portfolio of me/my models.

 

[FireHawk]

that include all them videos you made?

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

of you and your mum having ***? those ones are you talking about? **** yes, i've even got them up on youtube!

BURN

 

[FireHawk]

what about the one after i ****** your mom and you took a turn with her?

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

I sent that one to the cops and claimed that it was evidence of rape.

how about the one where i had a sandwich with both your parents? did you get that one in the mail?

 

[FireHawk]

so u turned yourself in for rape and no

 

[woodyloveslinkin]

dammit didn't read the whole sentence. I've totally lost that battle.

 

[MrsBennington-Delson]

aw cool pics Sarah!!

You're so pretty and cute ^_^

Btw how's it going in Sydney?