Foxx's Poetry Corner
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MrsBennington-Delson
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great poems greyfoxx!
I just... uhm... dunno... I.... they're awesome!!!
*can't wait to read more*
I just... uhm... dunno... I.... they're awesome!!!
*can't wait to read more*
Greyfoxx
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This is new....
Okay, here is a new one i just randomly typed about 3 seconds ago
Okay, here is a new one i just randomly typed about 3 seconds ago
I have become something
So dark and daring
I’ve become some creature
I strike fear into those innocents
When you see me
You try so hard not to scream
You see the darkness in me
You also see my suffering
My life before was so tough
You feel pity
You feel pain
You feel the darkness around
My new world has come to town
True to myself
I now stand tall
Unafraid of what I might do
With the souls of all of you….
So dark and daring
I’ve become some creature
I strike fear into those innocents
When you see me
You try so hard not to scream
You see the darkness in me
You also see my suffering
My life before was so tough
You feel pity
You feel pain
You feel the darkness around
My new world has come to town
True to myself
I now stand tall
Unafraid of what I might do
With the souls of all of you….
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chaz-girl-fanatic1730760665
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lol it's scary yes but i think it's AWEEEEEEEESOME^^
(have i already said that i love your poems
(have i already said that i love your poems
Greyfoxx
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My Fight
This time is growing longer
This place is growing darker
My mind is calm
My thoughts are clear
This night has come near
The spirits have come forth
To this graveyard where they lay
The thoughts of those departed
My eyes shed one single tear
The tear rolls off my face
The fate of my life is sealed
Destiny has its hold upon me
Though I will never go down
Not without a fighting stance
I will fight to the end of time
I promise this to myself
I will never give up on those I love
I will fight for them.
Fight….
This time is growing longer
This place is growing darker
My mind is calm
My thoughts are clear
This night has come near
The spirits have come forth
To this graveyard where they lay
The thoughts of those departed
My eyes shed one single tear
The tear rolls off my face
The fate of my life is sealed
Destiny has its hold upon me
Though I will never go down
Not without a fighting stance
I will fight to the end of time
I promise this to myself
I will never give up on those I love
I will fight for them.
Fight….
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LPpinkfreak821
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OH EM GEE! I LOVE THIS! I mean it's beautiful. Your are really talented. I wish I were that good, actually.
I love all four [i think there was 4... right?] poems. Their beautiful and very well writtien. Their pretty much amazing. But that one up there ^ is probably my favorite. That and The Fight one.
Greyfoxx
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Light Of Hope
Believe in something
Believe in something grand
Hope in something that you believe in
Hope keeps us strong
It keeps us going on
In the face of terror
In the sight of uncertainty
A light of Hope shines on
And you go for that irresistible light.
The light of Hope.
As you face doubt
As you have a flood of grief
You remember what you Hope for
You realize that its’ still there
Between the thoughts of concern
You remain Hopeful for your Dream
Don’t ever let it fade
Or else you shall have no reason to go on
You will feel no reason to survive
No reason to live
But if you keep the Hope
Keep it true
You will always go on
Always Hopeful for the future…
Believe in something
Believe in something grand
Hope in something that you believe in
Hope keeps us strong
It keeps us going on
In the face of terror
In the sight of uncertainty
A light of Hope shines on
And you go for that irresistible light.
The light of Hope.
As you face doubt
As you have a flood of grief
You remember what you Hope for
You realize that its’ still there
Between the thoughts of concern
You remain Hopeful for your Dream
Don’t ever let it fade
Or else you shall have no reason to go on
You will feel no reason to survive
No reason to live
But if you keep the Hope
Keep it true
You will always go on
Always Hopeful for the future…
Ravynlee
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Hey Foxxy, well I finally read it (The Fight). What strikes me more than even the emotion in this one is the way its structured. Each sentence is short, sharp and to the point. Coupled with the theme its almost a verbal attack, if you want to put it that way, without today's contemporarily-acceptible sarcasm. The ending is good too... feels like drawing a literary breath just before stepping into battle... which I guess is the idea, right?
As for the second one, (Light of Hope) it was good, but not as good, structurally as far as I'm concerned. Its just my humble opinion. Its very... positive. Weird. Especially after reading the previous one, very opposite in terms of theme and style. Exploring styles huh? I like that. I also admire the way you can change from predator to prey, so to speak. That was noice.
Anyways, all good. Noice work my gurl. Rant over for today.
:thumbsup:
As for the second one, (Light of Hope) it was good, but not as good, structurally as far as I'm concerned. Its just my humble opinion. Its very... positive. Weird. Especially after reading the previous one, very opposite in terms of theme and style. Exploring styles huh? I like that. I also admire the way you can change from predator to prey, so to speak. That was noice.
Anyways, all good. Noice work my gurl. Rant over for today.
:thumbsup:
Greyfoxx
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I know it isn't what i normally do..."nice stuff". I didn't write that on purpose....it was for a writing club i am in. we do "THEME" writing and 'Hope' Was the theme for this next meetings....i was experimenting with it because i had to write it.
as for "The Fight" compliment-You are very right mum. You do such a good job with interpritating(sp?) my writing and what i am 'doing' in the writing. I think that "The Fight" is one of my favorite works....
as for "The Fight" compliment-You are very right mum. You do such a good job with interpritating(sp?) my writing and what i am 'doing' in the writing. I think that "The Fight" is one of my favorite works....
Greyfoxx
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This is a poem that i made for no reason....or did i??? (and to those who think i wont have anything for the writing comp.....you're sadly mistaken)
In this time
In this place
You can’t even see His face.
Your mind is racing
Your heart is on fire
Your sight blurred.
My voice rings out in your ear
You let out a river of tears.
You walk blindly around
In this darkened town.
The wind howls
The forest creaks
You can’t even speak.
This town has no life
Except to your spite
You and me
And that thing makes three.
What is it?
Over there beyond the grave
It is calling out to you
What will you do?!
These things happening
These terrors around you
Your fears Realized
Your heart and mind cries.
This moment lasts forever
You don’t know what will happen
Till you Shock yourself awake
You’re in your room now
Sweat amid Your brow
You convince yourself it was but a dream
You are safe now in the house
But you still hear my voice
So was it a dream?
Or
Was it real?
Were you there?
In that haunted place?
Or was it just a dream of fate?
In this place
You can’t even see His face.
Your mind is racing
Your heart is on fire
Your sight blurred.
My voice rings out in your ear
You let out a river of tears.
You walk blindly around
In this darkened town.
The wind howls
The forest creaks
You can’t even speak.
This town has no life
Except to your spite
You and me
And that thing makes three.
What is it?
Over there beyond the grave
It is calling out to you
What will you do?!
These things happening
These terrors around you
Your fears Realized
Your heart and mind cries.
This moment lasts forever
You don’t know what will happen
Till you Shock yourself awake
You’re in your room now
Sweat amid Your brow
You convince yourself it was but a dream
You are safe now in the house
But you still hear my voice
So was it a dream?
Or
Was it real?
Were you there?
In that haunted place?
Or was it just a dream of fate?