Foxx's Poetry Corner

[Jeezy]

Yeah..another great one....you are so awesome

 

[Greyfoxx]

thankies guys, that poem was really uh, "touching" for me to write.

sadly i must say that i will not be fufilling ANY requests till i get my home internet back up, that will be in three days, four tops.

 

[Greyfoxx]

Since I have my Net back up in runnin, I am now Re-Opening my Request Line!! bwhahahahahha

Jeezy-I'm still working on you request, i should have it done soon :thumbsup:

you want to make a poem about me?
it hasn't to be right now

Still want that?

 

[MrsBennington-Delson]

Since I have my Net back up in runnin, I am now Re-Opening my Request Line!! bwhahahahahha

Jeezy-I'm still working on you request, i should have it done soon :thumbsup:


Still want that?

yeah if you want it... tell me what you need to know about me... thanx

 

[Jeezy]

Since I have my Net back up in runnin, I am now Re-Opening my Request Line!! bwhahahahahha

Jeezy-I'm still working on you request, i should have it done soon :thumbsup:


Still want that?

cool...and thank you...can't wait to get it...

 

[Greyfoxx]

yeah if you want it... tell me what you need to know about me... thanx

1-fav color
2-fav song
3-fav thing to do
4-how old?
5-what u normally wear (or wanna be wearing in the poem)
6-fun facts!
7-Where you live (not exactly, but country/town will be nice)
8-time of day u want it to be
9-anything else u wanna add

cool...and thank you...can't wait to get it...

I have two verses done.....u want three?

 

[Jeezy]

I have two verses done.....u want three?

three would be cool....if you can come up with another one...but two would be also alright....

 

[MrsBennington-Delson]

1-fav color
2-fav song
3-fav thing to do
4-how old?
5-what u normally wear (or wanna be wearing in the poem)
6-fun facts!
7-Where you live (not exactly, but country/town will be nice)
8-time of day u want it to be
9-anything else u wanna add

1. red + blue
2. more than a memory (hoobastank)
3. computer, dancing, singing...
4. 15
5. jeans + shirt
6. i have jokes which just i think their funny, im crazy + funny but totaly not outgoing (= very shy)... never had i bf (i think this is rather funny lol )
7. germany, bavaria
8. monday (if possible), 22.11pm <<< if its not goin take something what matches
9. idk... id like to live in the usa, canada or england.... sims2 addict... music addict...

i hope this will help you... and THANX SO MUCH!!! <3 ya

 

[Greyfoxx]

i hope this will help you... and THANX SO MUCH!!! <3 ya

yes it helps but dont thank me til i post it up here, i'll get started this weekend-ish.

 

[MrsBennington-Delson]

yes it helps but dont thank me til i post it up here, i'll get started this weekend-ish.

ok... no prob... :thumbsup:

 

[Greyfoxx]

Jeezys Request

this was kinda hard since u had a chorus, but i tried.

Verse One
I see you walking like me
Hear ya talking like me
Act, talk, be like me
As if I wasn’t even there
Trying to take myself
And ya know what will happen?
All because of you….


Chorus
...Because I know
Yeah I know something about you
You'll never be like me
Because I'm the one who blocks it,
I'm the one who stops it
and you never gonna see me again

Verse Two
Trying to take my life
Forcing yourself in
Ignoring my warnings.
I push you away
Protecting myself
from your thieving ways
You said you were my friend
But you stab me in the back
Yet I’ll always push you away

Verse Three
Here I am now
After all the blocking
After all the troubles.
You now know
That you will never be like me
And I’ll always be more than you
Since you can’t be me
Go off and go away
Stop trying to take myself
Cause You’ll never get it.​

 

[Jeezy]

That's awesome...thank you so much.....I'm gonna record it pretty soon...and then we'll make lots of money with it...lol

 

[MrsBennington-Delson]

yeah its good i love it... ill be your 1st fan!!

 

[GraDoN]

lol jeezy's first EP?

 

[Peterdea]

lol yeah! that'd be fully sick!

 

[Greyfoxx]

YAY! I'm glad ya'll like it so much

haha, Jeezy, I get 50% ya know! ^_^

 

[Jeezy]

YAY! I'm glad ya'll like it so much

haha, Jeezy, I get 50% ya know! ^_^

Probably we will just get 33.3% each...because I'll get Fribby to do the guitar for the track...

 

[Greyfoxx]

MrsBennington-Delson ::: Crap, i feel so bad, i didn't start on yer poem yet, i've been crazy sick *cough cough cough hack cough* I'll get to work asap MMMkay?

*please dont hate da foxx*

 

[MrsBennington-Delson]

MrsBennington-Delson ::: Crap, i feel so bad, i didn't start on yer poem yet, i've been crazy sick *cough cough cough hack cough* I'll get to work asap MMMkay?

*please dont hate da foxx*

no problem foxx... i dont hate u for that... i know if been in the same sitation its ok... take you time

 

[Greyfoxx]

no problem foxx... i dont hate u for that... i know if been in the same sitation its ok... take you time

otay, good, now that i'm sure u dont hate me, i'll make it perfect!!!