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Ravynlee

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Aww... this is so sweet... I'm just... It's funny, cause reading the reviews to mine I'm like 'how can that make you speachless?' (which is a huge compliment to me, btw, just hard to comprehend, cause I'm my own worst critic as we as writers all know) but reading this story here of yours I get that same sense of speachlessness that others talk about... and that's weird for me, being the ranter that I am known for being.

Point is I'm loving it. I don't really know what else to say/that's good enough.

I just want more. Always. I'm insatiable for good quality fics. This is one such fic. Please update soon!

*hugs*

-Rav :D

 

Pheonix791989

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"So whats with you and drummer boy? You guys seem pretty tense for a married couple."

chester said as he and rav were left standing there. Rav shrugged.

"Its hard with three kids and working two seperate jobs."

Rav said, feeling her guard dropp slightly. Chester was an easy person to talk to.

"I know how it can be. I was working day shift at burger king before I came out here."

Chester said as he offered Rav a seat on the couch.

"Really? where are you from?''

"Pheonix, Arrizona. Your accent dosent seem to be of this state either."

Chester said smugly. Rav smirked.

"well arnt you the smart one. I'm an aussie."

"Ahh well that explains alot. I love y'alls accents. they rock. "

"Thanks."

Rav said blushing slightly as chester handed her a beer from a cooler located by the sofa. They started drinking.

* an hour or so and many beers later*

Rob looked around but couldnt find Rav.

"Hey Mike have you seen Rav?"

Mike shrugged his shoulders and shook his head.

"no idea dude."

Rob went in search of her once more, checking the masses of people that seemed to accumulate in the various rooms. There was one last shut door that rob hadn checked behind, and hearing the most atrocious sounds comming from behind to door. Rob shook his head as he listened closely. the sounds were long gone. he knocked and then went in. The sight made his heart fly up into his throat and then drop instantly into his stomache. Rav was passed out naked ontop of chester who was equally naked and drunk. With his jaw clenched he cautiously put ravs clothes on and managed to pull her up in a firemans carry. owing to her realitively small frame, she was quite light. without saying a word to any one he dropped her in the back seat and drove home.

 

Ravynlee

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:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: etc

If I was speachless before, I'm mute now... OMFG... Rav! What have you done?! *slaps self silly*

Man... must... have... more... immediately...

 

Greyfoxx

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wow sis!!! great stuff that is!!!! remind me next time i see chaz IRL to get him VERY VERY drunk!!! :)

Neways, mum, dont slap yourself silly!! if u didnt do it you wouldnt have to craziest child on earth!!

 

Pheonix791989

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ok i decided to put the next part up so here it is

Rob gently put rav in the bed. He was fuming, beyond ******. He needed to get out and clear his head. He rung his mom.

"Hey mom."

"Robert! Whats wrong?"

"nothing, there's just been a change of plans. I'm comming to pick up the kids."

"Are you sure everythings fine?"

"I'm sure mom."

"ok then, see you soon."

Rob went and got the kids. He checked in on them after exchanging a few words of greatings towards his parents.

"Fribby and Sarah are asleep, Mel just wont sleep though. I dont kow whats gotten into her."

Rob nodded

"Its alright mom. She wont sleep unless im there. I dont understand it though."

"Its easy. You were the one person that she loves. when you have a childs love you have everything. even though you got signed to your band, singing group, what ever, no matter how many fans you have, you will always have mels love."

Rob nodded as he went into the room and picked up a squirming mel. she girgeled happily.

"daddy!"

she squealed. repeating her first and only word. Rob bounced her in his arms.

"Hey lil monkey. you miss me?"

"daddy!"

she squealed again. his mom was right. Rob kissed her on the top of her dark hair. He put her in the carrier and took her out to the car. He then got sarah and fribby, who were still sleeping. He drove back home. Rav was still asleep upstairs so he put sarah and fribby to bed. He held mel in his arms. He spread a blanket out on the living room floor where he put Mel down on her stomache. Rob laid down on his side as Mel crawled up to him and climbed up next to him.

"go to sleep you monkey."

He muttered as he pulled a pillow down from the couch. soon after Mel fell asleep, Rob drifted off right after her.

Rav woke up the next morning. Her head was splitting like a chord of wood. She clambered out of bed and went to the medecine cabinet. she pulled out the tylenol for her headache. she padded out of teh bed room and then across the hall to check on Fribby and the twins out of habit. 'rob must have goten them' she thought as fribby and sarah were still sleeping. She saw that Mel was absent from her crib and figured that Rob must have had her. Rob wasnt in the living room or in his office. Rav wondered where he could be. It wasnt like him to dissapear and not say anything. Yawning, she walked into the kitchen and opened up teh orange juice and poured herself a glass. The door opened up and Rav looked over in its direction. Rob carried Mel in one arm while he had a couple of bags of groceries in the other. Rob set the groceries down on the counter with mel.

"Morning rob."

"Morning."

Rob said curtly, not forgetting about what had happened last night. He pulled his hat off of his head and set it down. Mel automatically picked it up.

"i got to go out and do stuff today. I'm gonna take mel with me."

Rob said. Rav felt like his voice was distant.

"alright. just dont forget her daipers."

Rav said softly. Rob muttered something incohearent as he began to put up some of the boxes of food. rav sipped at the orange juice.

"So what are you planing on doing today since your off and no classes?"

Rav said as her husbands back was turned.

"goo."

Mel said as she picked up a can and tossed it. Rob caught it like it was nothing. He chuckeled.

"thats right goo."

Rob chuckeled as he continued to put up the cans.

"goo?"

Rav asked with an uncomprehending look on her face. Rob shrugged as he picked up Mel once more and his hat. He turned around and went off towards the back room to get more daipers to put in the daiper bag. Rav watched her youngest daughter crawl across the counter before Rob came back in and picked Mel up.

"I'm working late shift today."

Rav said softly.

"I havent forgotten dont worry about it."

Rob said in his curt voice. Mel raised her head up towards him.

"daddy."

she said again. Robs face softened as he looked at Mels brown eyes. He gave an exasperated sigh and shut the door. 'maybe he just drank too much' Rav said to herself. she tried to rationalize what might be bugging him. She heard Fribby's soft growl comming from the doorway. She picked up her son and asked him if he wanted breakfast. She pulled out a bunch of frozen tatertots and heated up the oven. 'What could it be?' she wondered as she replayed the nights events in her mind. all she could remember was talking with chester and then getting drunk..... Rav shook her head. She was being stupid. He couldnt know about what she and chester talked about. 'what did happen after my third beer?' she wondered as she put the potatoes in the oven.

 

Pheonix791989

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who said anything about a prequal to any story? this is just the childhood that we knew about but never really heard of. but if that its a prequal to all the stories of the family
 

Ravynlee

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**** straight.

I'm with Viking on this one - even though we know where it goes (glimpsing into the future) I'm still waiting anxiously to see how Rob reacts - and everyone else for that matter, when word eventually gets out about the affair. I'm also more interested to see when it happens, will the fallout occur before she finds out she's up the stick (preggers) then again when she finds out or will it all come to a crux in the delivery ward when they look at the little bundle of screaming joy that is Fox and go, 'Wait up a sec... something's not right here...'

Haha.

Can't wait. Rob's reaction so far is what I'd expect from him. He looks mean but I don't take him as the confrontational type (unlike me for the most part). He's probably the type to sit back and let it build up and build up til he snaps and climbs a clock tower or something... but he'll stick around regardless for the sole purpose of his kids. Gotta respect that. Aww.

Beautiful...

Now... wanting more as always! *gets hyper like Joe and 'Fribby' on sugar rush*

-Rav :p

 

Greyfoxx

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mum, i am NOT a screaming bundle of JOY, i'm a screaming bundle of EVIL!!!! and so THATS why i like to scream....OH!

GREAT UPDATES SIS!!!

 

Ravynlee

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Come on Mel, where's the update?!? *starts hyperventilating*

Please? Please! PLEASE?!

*big sad puppy dog eyes*

 

Pheonix791989

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Rob sat Mel down in the sand before spreading out a blanket and putting her on it. It was

pretty quiet for the morning. It was how he liked things. But even for ten am, the

california heat was setting in durring this late may day. This was one of Rob's favorite

places to come. It was a secluded area, not to many people knew about it so it was always

quiet and it allowed him time to think. Mel looked up at him from the position she held in

the sand. A smile graced his natural frown. He peeled his shirt off before kicking his

shoes off and laying watching his youngest play in the sand. As he watched Mel, he

continued to think. It was somethign that almost knotted his stomache as he thought about

it. After all he did for her, putting in hours after hours in that **** hole of a coffee shop to

pay the bills and keep food on the table, she found comfort in another mans arms. It was

almost down right insulting. Back in High school where he first met her, he dated a girl

named susan. but what was suposed to be shameless flirting turned in to a catastrophe of

sorts. Rav getting pregnant and then susan leaving him for another guy, he couldnt seem

to cut a break. Rob shook his head as he finally noticed mel was trying to burry him in the

sand. It'd be her problem to deal with, he decided. Rob then sighed as Mel started

giggeling. He'd have to face this problem sooner or later, but right now, he just wanted to

clear his head. Rob felt so confused. He was on the verge of the greatest thing that could

ever happen to him and he would be able to do something he loved the most, but, his

heart felt like it was being ripped apart from Rav's betrayal. Did he mean anything to her

or was he just the father of her kids. Could it have been something that he did or didnt

do? He couldnt remember the last time since the twins were born that they went to bed

together. One of them if not both were always up taking care of them. They learned with

Fribby that babies were time consuming, but what could have drove rav to this particular

decision. Rob sighed, he was thinking too much again.

"Come on monkey, lets go for a walk."

Rob put his hat on and put mel on his shoulders. She grabbed onto his head tightly. Some

of the few people at the beach looked on with amazement to see a tall burly guy with kid.

his friends always chastized him about being a giant teddy bear. But most of the time he

didnt care about them and what they said, it was all just fun and jokes. Rob walked with

mel on his shoulders down the beach.

 
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