My Version of our LPF family!

Greyfoxx

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I cant update mine yet... they are doing construction in my house and cant get to my other computer where it is saved. V.V
 

Greyfoxx

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more as requested.

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We stopped at Blockbusters to get about seven or eight movies. Chester seemed like he didn’t mind the people stopping and staring at him like he was a ***. “Dad, how do you stand this?” I whispered to him. He gave a soft smile. “It’s apart of the job. I don’t like it really, but hey. I gotta put up with it. So I just act like they are all dumb and don’t really know who they are looking at or else they’d be looking at me like I was a freak instead of a rock star.” I laughed. Then, like a thought out of nowhere, I realized something… if my dad was so good to me, then why did I have to leave him to live with my mom? This thought bugged me for the long car ride home. I turned to my dad when “The Transporter 2” was over. “Dad, why can I never see you anymore? Why did I have to leave?” I asked with a very low tone. My father sighed and turns to look at me. “The reason I think is that your mother thinks that I was a bad influence on you at a young age. But now I see that even without me, you have become to be so much like me that it’s unreal. Rav doesn’t want you to get into drugs and **** like I did when I was your age. I know you’re not into drugs, and I can’t do anything about it if you’re into drinking.” He gave me an ‘I know u drink’ look. “That’s all you. What I CAN do now though, is try to be a dad that you have missed.” He smiled warmly as he went to make more popcorn. “Well, why does Rob hate me so much? Is it because I’m your kid and not his? I mean, its no reason to take it out on me.” I said. “Dad, I want to go back to moms’ for a few days okay? I’ll leave on Friday and I’ll be back Monday morning, most likely around 4am. I want to see my ‘family’. I think Vi is worried. He has been leaving me messages on my cell like crazy.” I had trouble saying this… I wanted to stay with him, but I knew if I was going to make this work, I had to go back “home” every once in a while.

My dad looked sad yet understanding. “I know how you feel. Remember Fox; I’ll always be there for you. If you ever need me, call.” He said, and went back to the popcorn and that was the end of the discussion because I put in Starship Troopers. We love that movie. Around about 2am, I went to bed and prepared for the next day.

When I got up around noon, Chester was watching TV and making himself a sandwich. I came downstairs swinging my motorcycles’ key and my house key. Then, without looking up, my father threw a black key at me. I caught it without thinking about it. “What’s this?” I asked. “That right there is the key to this house. And the secretary number is your birthday. So now you can come and go as you please.” He said, smiling to himself. “Thanks dad. I’ll be back, and I’ll call if I need anything.” I walked to the garage and got on my cycle.

 

Greyfoxx

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thanks for the compliments. I hope to be a published author someday.... so ya'll'd better buy it! lmao.... dontcha just love cliffhangers?
 

Ravynlee

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I agree - developing nicely. Wow, has really opened my eyes to both characters, and what they both must be going through during awkward and difficult times. :(

But well written. Very heartfelt. Writing seems to be a passion for you too. It shows. You're very good at it.

*hugs*

<3 Rav :D

 

Greyfoxx

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okay.

WARNING! Rob does some bad things, but i know he wouldnt IRL! REMEMBER! my story will have MANY twists! DONT WORRY!

WARNING #2 !! CONTENT HAS SWEARING!

u have been warned

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When I arrived at my mothers’ house, it was quiet, very quiet. I walked up to the garage door leading to the kitchen. I put my key in it and turned. As soon as I walked in I was met with a fist in my face. I stumbled back with mostly shock. I shook my head and looked to see who would attack me. It was Rob. But it wasn’t Rob as I remembered him. He looked stressed and ****** off. I tried to get in the door again but this time it wasn’t a punch to the face, it was a kick to my gut. I was in shock. Why the **** was he beating me up? “You *****. You are the reason this family is broken up. You are no longer welcome in my house. Get out.” I stood up. “No, I belong here just as much as you do. Now, let me go to my room.” I growled at him.

I ran to my room and locked my door. I reached into my bag and grabbed my cell phone. I dialed my fathers’ number. “Hello? Fox? Is that you?” I coughed up blood before I could answer. “Dad? It’s Fox. Rob hit me. I am locked in my room. He punched me and kicked my gut. I’m coughing up blood. *Coughing more* dad, help please.” I heard him cussing on the other side and then he said, “I’ll be there in a minute Hun, stay there. I’m coming.” He hung up. Rob starting banging on my door. I could hear my sisters and my brother trying to stop him before he does serious damage to me. Then I heard my mum come into the picture. “What is going on here?” she asked loudly. My brother answered her. “He is mad that Foxx came back. He hit her. I have a feeling she called her Father.” There was a long pause. “Rob? Is this true? Did you hit your own daughter?” asked Rav. Rob stopped pounding on my door. “I didn’t hit my daughter! She is not my daughter. These are my daughters.” I have a feeling he pointed to the twins. Suddenly I heard a crash in the living room. My father has arrived. I opened my door only enough to see, attempting not to be noticed, though I failed when I coughed up blood on the floor at Robs’ feet. Chester came running to my door. “What the **** dude! Why did you hit my daughter?!” he screamed at Rob. I had a feeling they were going to start fighting. Rob just stood there like he did nothing as I lay there coughing up blood. All the sudden, I passed out.

When I woke up, I was in the hospital. My dad was asleep in a chair; I think he was waiting with me the whole time I was there. I looked at the clock. It said 2am Sunday. I was in a coma for more than two days. I felt better, and I was no longer coughing up blood. I wanted to sing. I started singing ‘With You’. I didn’t care if they didn’t want me to. I wanted to sing to my father. I sang exactly how I did before Rob hit me. I sang my heart out. I barely noticed that my father has woken and was tapping the beat with me. When I was done he said, “Well, I’m glad that you can still sing how you want to. How are you feeling?” he walked over to my bedside. “Eh, I’m feeling okay. I want to get out of this creepy hospital though. I hate it here. Oh, that reminds me, what happened after I passed out?” I asked. He sighed and looked off out the window into the distance. “Well, I got a little mad at the fact that he hit you so hard to make you cough up blood, so I hit him. Then Vi started yelling at Rob. Then Rav told me to take you to the hospital. So you have been in a slight coma for about two days now. Don’t worry about Rob anymore; I hereby give you permission to defend yourself in the case of hitting you. Now, he isn’t hurt badly, he just has a few bruises on his face and back. He will be nice from now on, I can promise you that. He won’t kick you out or be mean to you in anyway. I also hope that he will try to spend more time with his kids too.” He started beating a beat to a song that I didn’t know. “What song is that dad?” I asked, it was a really good beat. “Well, remember that song you wrote?” I nodded “Well, you recorded it without knowing and we all were trying to put a beat to it. So, we were going to ask you if we could put it on our new album. So… will you let your ‘Old Man’, *** I hate saying that, use your song? PLEASE?” he tried to give me a puppy dog look, I nodded. “YES!” he exclaimed. “When the **** am I getting out of here?” I asked, testing to see if her cared if a swore. “Well, right now!” he called in the doctor and they released my right there.

 

Greyfoxx

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MORE FOR THE PEEPS!

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When I got out of the hospital, we went back to my dads’ place to get some rest but I didn’t want to. I wanted to go out and have fun! But Nooooo, my dad had to go all parental and say that I couldn’t do anything but rest or swim in the indoor pool. So I decided to swim since I have just spent the last two days in a hospital ward. I turned to my dad, “Umm, dad? I don’t have my bathing suit.” He laughed. “Well, take this and go to the store and get a bikini, not too slutty please.” He handed me two fifties. I grinned. Yup, he’s still a dad. I grabbed my messenger bag and slung it over my shoulder. I winced in pain since I stressed my stomach where the bruise was. My dad rushed to my side, though I pushed him away. “No. I’m alright. I can handle it. I’m fine. Really.” I reassured him. I got my keys and left for the store. At the store, I went to the bathing suit section and I ran into my mum, literally. I ran head-on to her. “Oh, excuse me.” I said, knowing who it was, though I tried to act as if I didn’t know her. “Fox? Is that you? They released you already?” she asked, caringly. “Yes they did, I’m in a hurry mum.” I said rushing myself. I chose a black bikini with red spider-web-like strings. I loved it and I hoped it would not be too sluttish for dad. “Mum, is this too sluttish?” I asked. She looked at it. “Well Fox. I think it would look nice on you. How is your stomach?” she asked, looked at my stomach, attempting to touch it, though I backed away. “Don’t mum, it still hurts.” She backed off. “Sorry, I was just worrying about you. That’s all.” I gave a weak smile. “Well, I gotta go. I have to get back. It was good to see you mom. Bye.” I gave my mother a hug. I paid for my bikini, and left my mother there in the store.

At home, I changed into my bikini, and went to the pool. I laid down on a reclining chair under the glass roof of the pool that was letting in warm sunlight. Chester came out to give me a sandwich and lemonade; he stopped about three feet away from me. He was staring at my stomach. “Oh my *** Fox. That is from Rob? ***, that looks horrible.” He came and set down the tray he was carrying and gently pushed on my bruise. I winced in more pain. He sighed and sat next to me. I looked down at my bruise, it was blue, green, and purple and it had a few cuts that were oozing this morning, but were fine now. “*** **** Fox. You took one **** of a beating. I can’t believe he did that. Don’t worry about the band or Rob, Rave told me that he was drinking up a storm before you came in and he was depressed. So I guess he figured he’d take it out on you. If he was in a right state of mind, he would have never done anything like that to you.” Chester said. I nodded in agreement. I was bored again. I started to tap the beat to Runaway on the tray. Chester started to laugh and bobbed his head along. I laughed and did the same and started to sing. He went along with me. We sang the whole song just because we had nothing better to do. “So dad, what’s the next big thing you have to do?” I asked when we were done with the song. He thought for a moment. “Well, I guess it’d have to be an Interview with MTV on the new album. Hey I have an idea!” he smiled. “And what would that be?” I asked. He gave another wicked smile. “What if since your siblings want to spend more time with their father and me and Rob are doing the interview, maybe I can convince MTV to let you and everyone to come along. I’m sure they could think of some questions to ask you guys.” I laughed. I loved it when my dad came up with these plans. Also, this might give MTV and the world the chance to find out about Chaz and Rob as parents.

 

Ravynlee

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Excellent - as always. Rob on a drinking bender? Not so sure, but then he did beat his stepdaughter and land her in the hospital, so having said that *shudders*

Rav should divorce him right there... but I get the feeling maybe all is not well on the home front there neither. She's (Rav) acting so strange. The incident bumping into Fox at the store made me smile, but in a sad way. I actually feel sorry for Rav at the moment (and that's a first, she's usually a tough broad, or has been in these stories) that I almost got the impression she's maybe a little scared herself. Hope Rob's still not swinging those fists at home *gasp!* she's acting so... different. You can tell she cares for her daughter but almost seems to afraid to reach out to her in a way... maybe that's just Fox being stubborn. Don't know where she gets that trait from *looks innocent* but seriously... Chester's making a great dad. I don't know why he wasn't around more for her when she was growing up - I guess his marriage to Sam and commitments to Draven (BTW, where is he at the moment in all this? With his Mum I'm assuming - and how weird is that, having a son named Draven and a one-time lover named Ravyn/Raven - kinda creepy really XD) probably kept him busy. Damned rockstar fathers. But the interview on MTV sounds cool. ****. Makes me wish for a moment it was real so I could go watch it myself... the guys haven't been seen together for a while so it would be a nice change...

*sigh*

Great as always. Can't wait for more. You write with heart. Well done.

*hugs*

-Rav :D

 
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