Foxx's Poetry Corner

[Greyfoxx]

I said that I like it...
yeah it's good

the foxx strikes once again

Thankies.

And it reflects what i should do cause thats what i'm feeling, just need to get it out of me thats all. lol

 

[DarknessLover]

I like it! It is very catchy!

I just don't feel the same emotion as usual Grey...

I do like the chorus though and the bridge is intresting

 

[Sygy]

that was good foxx, its so good bc it can applied to any situation where some one is being pushed around, very good!

 

[diana]

It's amazing...so powerful...and I love it cuz it's saying the truth...something that we should all be doing...speaking our mind...we're all afraid to at some point...or the majority of time...*shrugs* Great lyrics to encourage someone...

 

[Greyfoxx]

CHEATING AND LIES




Verse One

Every time you talk to me

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Lies flow from your mouth

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Your words make my heart flee

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Made my trust go south

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Lies and cheating

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Keeps your heart beating

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Stab me in the back

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Over and over again

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Dig the knife in deeper

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Just to see how I react.

 




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Chorus

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Lying through the fake smile

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Acting like I’m worth your while

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Another has you from me

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Two-timing sets you free

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Remember our good times

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And see them walk a fine line

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Walk a fine line

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Walk a fine line…

 




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Verse Two

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Cheating is what you do

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Everyone and their crew

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Lies are your life

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And digging into me like a knife

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Take my love for advantage

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I can’t believe how you’ve managed

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To ruin everything we had

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Like you were crazy ******* mad

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Keep away from what once was

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I’m done with your flaws

 




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Chorus

 

 

((Dedicated to DarknessLover))

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[Victim]

Very nice..I like this alot.. Something alot of people can relate to.. and thats import.. Flows nicely.. Very nice work!

 

[DarknessLover]

OMFGGGGG <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 I LOVE IT I didn't really thing you could actually whip that situation into lyrics like that! NICE WORK!!!

 

[diana]

It's very nice...I like it...I'm gonna say it again...you're good, girl...

 

[Jeezy]

it's nice...seems like you don't have a writers block anymore

 

[Greyfoxx]

Thanks ya'll. I'm glad ya like it. ^_^ No more writers block for Teh Foxxeh Ladeh

 

[Sygy]

i really like the raw anger, very alanis morrisette if i may add!

 

[Greyfoxx]

Sitting alone in a darkened room

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Feeling as if this is my tomb

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No reason for me to leave

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Unless people start to believe

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That myths can be true

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That we live through the ages

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Our kind exist

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And we roam the world

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Looking

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Searching for our place

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As if it was a race

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To see what we can find

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To past the never-ending time

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We have a gift

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But we suffer the curse

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Of knowing our fate

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Of seeing the life be lived in others

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A life we can no longer have

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We **** for only one thing

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The life force of everyone

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Everything

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We take what we cannot have

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We wait for night to come

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And our lives begin

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For some short hours

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We live again.

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Until the time comes

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When we must retreat from the rising sun

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And hide like animals

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Till we can come out once more

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We are…immortals.

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[Victim]

Very nice.. Vampires are cool, so I really enjoyed this.. I like have you had some ryhming lines and then others weren't.. Flows well, great content.. Very nice.. Love it.

 

[Greyfoxx]

OOoo thanks so much Vic!!! *tackle hugs*

 

[Jeezy]

I think the last line is what makes it really strong.

The whole thing is great but the last line makes it untouchable.

 

[Greyfoxx]

I think the last line is what makes it really strong.
The whole thing is great but the last line makes it untouchable.

Thankies. I re-read the poem and decided it needed that line.... may i ask why u think its "untouchable"?

 

[Jeezy]

Thankies. I re-read the poem and decided it needed that line.... may i ask why u think its "untouchable"?

Well....hard to explain

I just think no one on here can reach your level in poetry writing

 

[Greyfoxx]

Well....hard to explain
I just think no one on here can reach your level in poetry writing

awww. thanks sooo much. *snuffles* I think i'm gonna cry. I always get like this when i hear something like that. Thanks so much though, you have no idea how much that means to me.

 

[Jeezy]

awww. thanks sooo much. *snuffles* I think i'm gonna cry. I always get like this when i hear something like that. Thanks so much though, you have no idea how much that means to me.

awww...no problem...and I truly mean it like I said it

*hugs*

 

[Greyfoxx]

awww...no problem...and I truly mean it like I said it
*hugs*

:''( thanksssss *hugs* Thats so unbelievably nice....