LPShinodaFM
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I love your writing Greyfoxx! They're though provoking and deep. Really, really nice stuff.
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DarknessLover
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Whoa, that one creeped me out...lol I like it, since it gives you this feel of paranoia lol...It's really cool
littleblackstone
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absolutely agreed!!!
have nothing else to say... just keep writing!!
Greyfoxx
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Tortured
Surrounded by a suspicious lot
Surrounded by a suspicious lot
Wondering what they are about to plot
If their intentions are cruel
That they won’t follow the rules.
Whatever they try to do to me
My soul and mind shall always be free.
“Submit her to torture,” I hear them say
“Keep her there for about twenty days”
I keep my calm as they tie me up
My mouth stays quiet as they lift me up.
The satisfaction, I will not give them
Of knowing that to me, they sure offend.
I wince when they turn their back
So they don’t see how I react.
My mind concentrates on what they don’t know
What they try to get me to show
I’m trained never to give them my secret
I’ll always be able to keep it
Torture chambers fill with my own blood
As I fall to the ground with a thud
They grow weary with my resistance
As I stand and take a calm stance
Prisoner of war they call me
They claim they will never set me free
When they leave, I set to my plan
Preparing myself to go on the lam
Kicking a hole in the wall
I see the bricks come out and fall
Starved I may be
But fitting through the hole sets me free.
DarknessLover
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Is this like about the first day of school? i wrote one but it sucks >.< lol
I like this alot, it keeps your evil mind in it, but with that feel of Greyfoxx all over it..like pie! lol
I like this alot, it keeps your evil mind in it, but with that feel of Greyfoxx all over it..like pie! lol
DarknessLover
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Isn't school war? *****
littleblackstone
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congratz Foxxy!!!!!!!!
MrsBennington-Delson
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sorry for not commenting your poem last night i had to get off right away ...
but I read it!
and its awesome!! love that darkness in it ^.^
but I read it!
and its awesome!! love that darkness in it ^.^
Greyfoxx
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Make me alive…
Lurking in the shadows
Watching my prey
I smile grimly as he panics
His fate known only to me
My coat flutters silently in the wind
I breathe in his fear
Opening my eyes fully
He sees the red glint in the darkness
Dread freezes him to the ground
Unable to move from the spot.
Fangs shine from my upper jaw
Lethal weapons for my personal use
I walk slowly to my victim
Circling him slowly
I grin as his eyes widen
His terror showing clearly
I marvel at the simple frame of the man
His muscles tense as I drag a claw over his spine
I laugh menacingly at him
My voice echoing in the night air
I slip my hand around his neck
My cold fingers turning his head to one side.
My hand feels his heart beat
Pulsing strong against his flesh
My fangs swiftly pierce his neck
Forcing his blood to flow to me
Drawing it to me for my satisfaction
Living in the moment of the blood
As my eyes turn red
And my heart beats again…
DarknessLover
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Wow...That...was...really...good actually, i had a sickengly good visual of it...wow...nightmare time! *****
Greyfoxx
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“Battles of The Ancients”
running through the dense forests
feeling the wind snap at my face
My comrades fallen, laid to rest
I fear I have left my place.
Fire rains down from the skies
Trees burn before my eyes
Lightening splits the heavens
Thunder rings out fear in the peasants
Screams from far and near
Call for help to ease their fear
With my bow drawn back
Ready for the brutal attack
Hoping the gods are on my side
As I climb on my sturdy ride.
My steed gallops towards the fight
Ready to make this world right.
Blood stains the dagger at my waist
Stained from the enemies I face.
My troops rage against their oppressor
Never thinking of the lesser
Clashing of Good and Evil
Never acting like they’re feeble
A war started by the gods of men
But as a warrior, we’ll defend
Of Honor, Duty, and Grace
I'll forever defend the Human Race.
I'll forever defend the Human Race.
DarknessLover
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tsk tsk...I expected...
THIS TO BE AMAZING!
guess what though....
IT IS!! I LOVE the "elemental stuff" like the thunder, it's so cool...great work again
THIS TO BE AMAZING!
guess what though....
IT IS!! I LOVE the "elemental stuff" like the thunder, it's so cool...great work again