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Greyfoxx

Greyfoxx

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A Mothers’ day Poem

 

 




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This is a poem I make for you

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The mother who’s believed in me

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The one who is always by my side

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Cheering me on to go for the Best.

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I know I haven’t been the perfect daughter

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Back-talking, ignoring, and things of that sort

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But even thought I’m not perfect

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You still say, “I always love you.”

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You’ve dealt with pain I can only imagine

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But you still put a smile on your face.

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Three kids you brought into this world

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And for this I am glad.

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We’ve never figured out how to show how much we care

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But I guess I’ll give it a shot

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Seventeen years ago I became your child

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And for Seventeen years you’ve guided me

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So no, I’ll show you how much I truly care

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By giving you this poem

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Straight from my heart.

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I don’t know if my brother and sister have said this enough

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But I’ll say it for myself

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I love you Mom, and Always Will.

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Love,

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Greyfoxx

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Dedicated to My Mum, the best mom a girl can ask for

 
DarknessLover

DarknessLover

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Holy *** Greyfoxx, that's an amazing poem! I LOOOVEEE IT

I really loved it, it really sounds like you love your mom.

GREAT WORK!!

 
Friðbjörn

Friðbjörn

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well written, really beautiful

don't think I could've said anything like this better to my mum with my own little words

 
Greyfoxx

Greyfoxx

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Revived By You

Intro:

My sight is blurred

Vision denied to me

My thoughts are tainted

They aren't my own

Verse One:

When i lost sight of myself

You were there to guide me.

I broke down in Pain

Yet you comforted my soul.

If tears were in my eyes

You'd Settle all my cries.

When I'd scream for Help

You were there to answer my call

Chorus:

When i was down

A guiding soul helped me up

When i thought I'd die

An Angel revived my soul.

It took away my fear

Took away my doubt

And now...

I believe in myself

Verse Two:

You told me to sing my heart out

So here I am

Singing to the Angel

Who saved my soul!

Brought me back from the dark

Into the Music

Into the Light

This feels so **** right

Chorus x2

dedicated to a certian person who has been helping me through tough times

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MrsBennington-Delson

MrsBennington-Delson

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honestly i have to say that i couldnt really feel the rhythm... but besides of my 'rhythm-problems' lol I really like it!!

and you know what? this is one reason why i dont write poems/lyrics that much bc you bring out everything i would write just in a waaaaaaay better way :D :D:D

 
Greyfoxx

Greyfoxx

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I've had mixed reviews. The guy i wrote this for/about said it was awesome, so thank ya'll for commenting!!! ^_^ *hugs ya'll and gives ya cookies*
 
diana

diana

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Foxx, I'm so sorry I haven't checked out your stuff here before...even though you asked me to do it...hope you're not too mad...

Anyway, I like Just One More...I think only a person going through the similar thing can really feel it...

A poem for your mother is sweet...did you give it to her? What was her response like?

Revived By You is good...but I guess I'm the only one who thinks that Just One More is better, lol...yeah, my taste is ****** up... :D

 
Greyfoxx

Greyfoxx

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Foxx, I'm so sorry I haven't checked out your stuff here before...even though you asked me to do it...hope you're not too mad...
Anyway, I like Just One More...I think only a person going through the similar thing can really feel it...

A poem for your mother is sweet...did you give it to her? What was her response like?

Revived By You is good...but I guess I'm the only one who thinks that Just One More is better, lol...yeah, my taste is ****** up... :D
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Awwww, i could never EVER be bad at you. You are one of the few that said Just One More is good/great. I appricate that a lot since people said it was that great.

The poem for my mum, i gave it to her and while she was reading it she teared up and cried aloud. Then hugged me and said it's the best thing she has ever gotten. ^_^ that made my day

Your taste isn't ****** up, you are just able to see the emotions i try to get people to feel....thats a good thing

*hug* thank you so much Diana. that meant a lot to me

 
diana

diana

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Awwww, i could never EVER be bad at you. You are one of the few that said Just One More is good/great. I appricate that a lot since people said it was that great.
The poem for my mum, i gave it to her and while she was reading it she teared up and cried aloud. Then hugged me and said it's the best thing she has ever gotten. ^_^ that made my day

Your taste isn't ****** up, you are just able to see the emotions i try to get people to feel....thats a good thing

*hug* thank you so much Diana. that meant a lot to me
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^^ Thank you for not being mad at me...*hugs*

Awww...that must have felt awesome...for both of you...^^

You are so very welcome...*hugs again*

 
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